The Monsters In The Castle Walls

In The Begining

Hey! I'm Wilbur soot I'm 12 And my brother Tommy is 6 and a half but that doesn't really count

Wilburs POV

"Wilby!" My brother cried
"Tom shhh what's wrong mate"
"Wilby I'm scared, wheres momma" He started sobbing uncontrollably. We both heard a crash from the kitchen, I knew it was mama and papa they always fought.
"Wilby is momma okay! Please help momma wilby"
Tommy was scared shitless and he needed comfort, but he only wanted mama to be okay and I couldn't let him down. I rushed outside, to the kitchen, mama was on the ground, lifeless.
"MAMA!" I ran to her body she wasn't breathing, I stared at papa he had no guilt instead that sick bastard was smiling as my mama, no! Our mama was on the ground in a pool of her own blood.

Tommy's POV

"MAMA!" After a few seconds I stared crying even more that didn't sound good and Wilby was upset. "YOU SICK BASTARD YOU KILLED OUR MAMA!" Wilby was yelling he hates yelling, I knew something was wrong I may be six but I'm not stupid. I ran out of my room to see wilby on the floor next to mama "Papa? Mama?" I cried
"Tommy, Tommy you need to run!" But it was to late papa grabbed me by the neck. Wilby had kicked papa in his legs making him fall.
"Ouch!" After papa picked himself off of the ground and hit Wilby in the head, he fell over... passed out blood everywhere. I stood in shock but papa grabbed me again and threw me against my wall I heard something crack it was definitely broken, everything than faded to black the last thing I saw was a gun in papas hand

Wilburs POV

I woke up really tired when I sat up I saw blood everywhere than a sharp pain hit me I looked at where the pain was... I WAS SHOOT IN MY LEG! I looked around for Tommy once I found him it was a horrific sight he was a ball of flesh I tried to crawl over. I wanted to be with Tommy, before I died, I loved him so fucking much and to see him like this hurt me. I slowly drifted back to sleep but before I did, the cops showed up and our eyes made contact.

Police POV

"Triple zero what and where's your emergency!"
"HELP Next door I heard a gun shot and someone rushing out of the house, I THINK SOMEONE WAS MURDERED"
"Sir I need you to calm down where are you and I'll send you police and ambulances"
"Thank god! I'm at ******* street please hurry".
It was my 5th day at the job and this day never left my memories.
When we got to the house I opened the door to see 2 kids both under the age of 15 hugging each other clearly injured and both on the brink of death. I locked eyes with the tall brunette, he was crying and covered in blood than he closed his eyes and entered a deep sleep . It took me a few moments to realise that there was a women on the ground maybe 2 or 3 meters away, she was dead and severely bruised a bone was showing and her face was deformed. after that I had nightmares.

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Hello guys it's me the author this is my first book and I always love feedback so if there is anything that you can help me with just tell me I really appreciate the help