OMP this story is so cringe! Hasn't been updated since April of 2017... four years. I haven't been on here in a bit so I was rereading my stories to see if I could figure out how to continue...
And I couldn't finish reading this one. I want to redo it but at the same time I don't. Let me know what you all want. If I redo it the chapters would be longer, better written, less double explainations (things you've already learned), and more descriptive. It would be a more natural romance instead of whatever this was that I put. Yautja courting has to have actual courting not just the... 'I-like-the-way-you-smell-and-feel-you're-mine' stuff I have going on here.
Or I can leave it as it is.
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(AVP fanfiction) Unsuspected Hunter
Fiksi PenggemarScar, Wolf, Celtic and Chopper come to Earth to hunt something. While there Scar sees an ooman girl ambushed. He helps her and he sees she is no ordinary ooman. Plot belongs to me. Scar, Celtic, Chopper and Wolf do NOT (although I wish they did) bel...
