A Special Christmas Wish

Chapter two. Good things occur

How was that guys?? i know it is pretty bad ohwell please comment on how you think it is going. BTW this is only a hort story so it is only going to be about 5 chapters or even 3 and that's it.

xx.Kym7687.xx

Ohh shall i describe this little girl to you?? ok. Her name is Sylvia Higgleburth, she is 9 years old and lives in London, England. She is in the London Orphanage and has been there since she was 5.

Once Sylvia ate her breakfast which was a toasted muffin with bacon and egg, she ran upstairs to get dresses in her most Christmassy looking outfit. The last few days she had been so out of the blue and upset that even though she absolutely LOVES sport she never went outside with the sports person, but today things were different. Once she was dressed, she ran all the way downstairs and outside the the sports person to play soccer, before they knew it, it was lunch time so they had lunch.

After lunch, Sylvia went upstairs to collect all of her art and craft things and carefully wandered back down stairs, and skipped over to the artistic lady, and they both made Christmas Cards to all of her friends from the Orphanage, to them in their new homes.

"Time for Dinner Sylvia," the chef of the orphanage called out just as the last card was finished. so she skipped happily into the dining room and had her dinner. After dinner she opened her Christmas presents, and she almost fell off her chair and onto the floor in excitement a she just realised that Santa DID hear her prayers, she was right this IS the best day ever. She got a little dolly, with long blonde hair and bright blue eyes, and she named her Madison after one of her favourite people who work there. So she played and platted her hair and brushed it and had LOADS of fun.

After playing with her toys she went to bed with a big grin on her face.

As i keep on saying this is a really bad story as it is my first but please tell me what you think of this.

          THX