Am I worthy yet?

Chapter 1: spidey sense

A thundering crash echoed through the streets as a giant piece of metal fell from the sky. It moved. It began to wake and wander through the streets causing fear and chaos as it powered through violently,crushing anything in its way. The pitiful screeches which emerged from the homes of the people could be heard from miles away. Distress and chaos everywhere. Buildings torn and roads shredded as the monstrous creature lurked the city.
It didnt take much time for a young boy to know something was terribly wrong. It was the middles of day and he was in class, anxiously waiting for the safety protocol to take place so he could sneak out whilst the other kids hid away. That would be his chance.

Peters pov
We were all sitting in science , the class focused on what the teacher was saying whilst i was figuring out who to strengthen my web solution. Well , how to improve it suppose. I was still getting used to everything. Getting used to what a freak i turned into. Its not all bad I suppose, i can now climb walls and jump high up. Not exactly sure how this all started but this is my life now, ever since summer.
The beginning of class was torture, i felt sweaty and anxious for some reason. I could feel my heart speeding up , as sudden rush of adrenaline i thought. Something was up. I could sense it.
Halfway through class the siren went off, we could here and feel the loud destruction happening from the other side of the city, the screaming and panic that struck everyone. Except me. I looked outside the window and saw it. A huge metal creature, possibly a robot? From space maybe. "Thats awesome" I thought. It was incredible. The other kids rushed out whilst the teacher yelled at me for not hurrying up. I had to get of there and fast. Just as everyone was going to the hideout where they would be safe from harm , I luckily managed to escape and started going towards the mess. I brought my suit with me everywhere, mr stark gave me a new one,its amazing. I put it on as i swung towards the location. The thing was huge. I activated destruction mode, that would give me enough time to actually think about how i could handle this. I need to prove to mr stark that im more than just a friendly neighborhood spider-man. I can be so much more if he gave me chance. I can help.

Peter got there just in time, the metal creature was oblivious to him, peter shot him with his webs and started to wrap around its body and cover its eyes and used the broken pieces of the buildings to hit it. That did the trick until it struck at peter . His body flew across the sky , the strong force made the wind feel as if it was piercing through his body. He went unconscious. He laid there helplessly. The creature still free and damaging everything around it. Peter was still .

Peters thoughts
Shit.shit.shit.shit. I need to get up . Shit. My heads pounding. God it feels like my skulls being smashed with a hammer over and over again. I need to get up. I- i cant move . No . Please. I need to- . I gotta help. I can do this. I can help. Shit. Well great, just fucking wonderful. The one chance i get to show that i can be a hero and make mr stark proud and it all goes to shit. I'll probably just get another lecture about how i should just keep low . God , im capable of saving people. I've done it before... why wont he give me a chance? Why wont he trust me?
I need to get up. Now. Please.