Wings of fire lemons that are...well lemony (request open)

Glory x deathbringer (love)

Glory's POV:
it was pitch black in the castle,and Glory was having non of that. As she felt her way around she found her self calling out her stupid boyfriends name.
"Deathbringer?where are you?"
Suddenly she ran into something,or rather someone.
"Oh fuck!sorry glory."

"It's okay" glory sighed,at least we was smart enough to have a jar of fireflys on hand and not a torch.
Glory rubbed her head and cursed "oh fuck me"
"Well if you insist" said Deathbringer joking around yet kinda wanting to actually fuck glory
Glory instantly turned pink,so pink it illuminated the room some how (listen I'm just the writer don't judge me)

"I mean you don't have to" deathy boy stammered
"It was just a-"
"No actually I kinda wanna fuck right now" said glory cutting him off
"Wait really?"Death bringer said shocked
"Yea,besides I need an heir to the throne anyways"
"But first let's get to the mating pavilion"
"Agreed"

No ones point of view:
The mating pavilion was a pavilion away from the others so the horny bastards don't wake anyone up;lucky for us we get to watch those horny bastards

As deathbringer's member slowly came out massive and as hard as a rock,he made sure that Glory was Sure of this
"Are you sure you wanna do this?
"Yes"said glory lying on her back,"now shove the damn thing in already or-"
She couldn't finish her words before death bringer rammed his member in glory's tight pussy,instantly break her hymen
Glory was in pain,but not for long as deathbringer started to hit her g-spot,making her cum quickly and repeatedly
"Faster-Mwa~,faster" glory said in between moans in pure ecstasy
Deathbringer obliged to this and went faster,glory thrusting her hips to keep up with  his member as well.
"I'm gonna cum!"
Shouted glory,and she did,as her cum leaked down her huge thick thighs,Deathbringer became faster and tougher,hitting her womb.
Deathbringers knot was staring to bother him as he couldn't exactly ram his entire cock in,so that's exactly what he did
As soon as Deathbringer shoved it in he stared cumming loads and loads into glory,her curvy body twitching with the pleasure.

After he pulled out,glory was still moaning,pussy leaking cum.
Deathbringer carried glory to their sleeping pavilion and after they cleaned up,they went to sleep
(So how was my first attempt at this?I welcome critics)