𝐏𝐎𝐋𝐈𝐒𝐇𝐄𝐃 𝐅𝐀𝐍𝐆𝐒 │ [M!Reader X Blake Belladonna]

[Conclusion]

Let me get this straight: This fanfic isn't the worst, but it can be better. A lot better.

So, that's how I came to the conclusion that before continuing this fanfic, I'll rewrite it. Don't get me wrong, as I said, this is not the worst RWBY Fanfic on this site, but I could do something much better than this. I don't need to go back and read it all again to know that, but I will. Since I wish to strengthen myself, and become even better as a writer, this is what will happen before I continue and write Volume 4.

There are a lot of things that I rushed only to get chapters done, which is a mistake that I struggle with to this very day. There are sub-plots that were never properly explained, some things that, in general, I could polish to make even better. That, and I also wish to write a slightly-different story than the one that RWBY "writers" wrote. Because, even before Volume 4, there were a few things wrong in there, no?

I mean, think about it. Jaune didn't know what "Aura" was. Not knowing an essential thing that literally everyone in the world has? And then Pyrrha, who starts to explain it to him, do it like she was teaching a class. What type of teenager out there, in the middle of a forest filled to the brim with monsters wanting nothing more than to kill you, would have an entire speech like that one to be ready on the fly, you know?

Sure, she is very strong, but that doesn't mean anything. A few other points that I could explore to make better, even more on my newer and future fanfictions are:

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[ Why did the fuck no one said anything about this?]

I mean, Y/N was public about the fact that he was the former Vice-Leader of the White Fang. Even if he were looking to change, no one would take that just as easily. Sure, he doesn't care, but that doesn't mean that people around him won't care, either. Even more so his own team. The guys are being led by a former criminal who killed people, a former terrorist who would be capable of doing anything for himself.

Sure, it is a sense of companionship from the others, but no one would be just fine with it like one, two, and three. There's also Weiss barely replying to when he called out to how much of a bitch she was being in Late-Volume 1. She barely even said anything to him, and just... Kinda took it. The same thing applies to Prince. I mean, the guy was throwing gory descriptions left and right with no issues, just like that.

How would you feel if someone like that was to happen? You know, if the former leader of a world-wide criminal organization were to lead you and a bunch of strangers in a Huntsmen School. And, along with that, there was also a psychopath that carried his own knives by having them stabbed against his own body... Yeah. No one in their right mind would accept it so easily like everyone in this fanfiction did.

Now Vuxulai. I mean, the guy walked around carrying cigarettes and alcohol in the middle of a school like he was in a bar. The guy was literally a massive alcoholic whose weapon is a motorcycle. He was literally drunk-driving around without a care in the world, and without people calling out to him. Sure, he was a "professional", but even that didn't make it nearly as safe to the point where people would leave him.

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