Results of Short story Genre are up
Special Thanks to Judges
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Book: Father's Love
By : lovely_girl_zone
Title:4/5
Cover:8/10
Blurb:3/5
Plot:8/10
Character development : 8/10
Grammar:9/10
Review: The title was good.The cover was nice but it would be perfect if it was more attracting.If the blurb contains suspence or a cliffhanger then it would make readers excited.The plot was nice and it would be more interesting to read if u add more dialogues.The characters are good and I think character development will be shown in the upcoming chapters because we can't figure out the character development in such a few chapters.Few grammatical mistakes are there.It would be perfect if there wasn't any.
Total : 38/50
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Book:Dear Birdie[A Novella]
By : makel_e
Title:5/5
Cover:8/10
Blurb:4/5
Plot:8/10
Character development:10/10
Grammar:9/10
Review: The title and cover was nice.The blurb was nice but if u add some suspence or cliffhanger then it would make readers curious to know what happens next.The plot was interesting to read and the characters justifies the plot.Few grammatical mistakes are there.It would be perfect if there wasn't any.
Total : 44/50
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Book: Sairat's Daughter Savi
By : Divyanshisri21
Title:5/5
Cover:8/10
Blurb:3/5
Plot:9/10
Character development:10/10
Grammar:5/10
Review: The title and cover was nice.The blurb was nice but it would be perfect if u add some suspence or cliffhanger which would make readers excited.The plot was interesting to read which includes love, fights, emotional moments etc and the characters justifies the plot.There are some grammatical mistakes which u can be improved while writing next time.
Total - 40/50
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Book - Vani- twisted tale
By - _TwilightWord_
Title - 5 out of 5 (Title is good and catchy.)
Cover - 9 out of 10 (It could be more be more better but it's good.)
Blurb - 2 out of 5 (The Blurb didn't Contain much about the story. The author can provide more hints to attract more readers.)
Plot - 8 out of 10 (Plot is good and the story is going in a nice direction.)
Character development -8 out of 10 (There are only 4 chapters so can't really tell about the character development but till now the character of Veera and Bani is describe really well. Can't say the same about Jay's character.)
Grammar - 9 out of 10 (There were few grammatical and spelling mistakes here and there. Nothing big. The problem can be solved if the author recheck his/her work once after publishing.)
I liked the book.
Total - 41/50
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Book - Second chance to life and love By - ShwethaRajkumar
Title - 3 out of 5 (It is okay. But I can't understand by which character's POV this title is given. If it is given from Sairat's view than I think the title is not suiting the story but if it is given from Patralekha's view then the title is good.)
Cover - 3 out of 10 (The cover for the story is nothing special. It needs a lot of work to be done by author. The author should edit the pics and add the book's title and authors name on the cover. According to me the cover must contain a book' name.)
Blurb - 2/5
Plot - 5 out of 10(There was not really a plot in the later chapters. In the starting chapters I was getting the plot that Virat was hurt then Sai's mental conditions and then she had to face the flood but after that I felt the author is stretching the story. So yeah. I felt the story is scattered. I was not able to connect with the story.)
Character development - 8 out of 10 (Every character was described in a positive way. Loved this part of the story.)
Grammar - 8 out of 10 (There were few grammatical mistakes and spelling mistakes here and there. Author can recheck the work once before publishing to avoid these mistakes.)
Total - 29/50
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Book -Marriage masterplan- a shivi story By - Vivpri
Title - 5 out of 5 (The title is good and matches the story well.)
Cover - 7 out of 10 (Need more work. It needs a lot of work. The author/ writer should edit the image a little and add the name of the book and the authors name. The image chosen by the author is good as it is going perfectly well with the story line.)
Blurb - 2 out of 5 (There is not much mentioned in the Blurb. It just contained that the story is based upon Shivi. The author should give more hints to attract more readers.)
Plot - 9 out of 10 (I personally loved the plot of the story and the story is going great. Loved the love hate chemistry between Shivi. Story is going great. The story is literally funny. Loved it.)
Character development - 10 out of 10 (I loved how all the characters were brought forward. Not only the lead characters were described good but the supporting characters are also described really well. I really liked the Mausi's character and loved Shivi ;))
Grammar - 9 out of 10 (There were not many mistakes in the story. Very few mistakes were there.)
Total - 42/50
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Book - Destined to be together
By - FirstRaysOfSun
Title - 3 out of 5 ( Its quiet common. I have seen this title before.)
Cover - 10 out of 10 (The cover is good.)
Blurb - 5 out of 5
Plot - 9 out of 10
Character development - 8 out of 10.
Grammar - 7 out of 10 (There were few grammatical mistakes and also spelling mistakes.)
Total - 41/50
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SO TIME FOR DECLARING THE WINNERS
3RD PLACE GOES TO........
✨"Vani -twisted tail by _TwilightWord_
2ND PLACE GOES TO.........
✨"Destined to be together" by FirstRaysOfSun
✨"Marriage masterplan - a shivi short story" by Vivpri
1ST PLACE GOES TO.........
✨"Dear birdie (A NOVELLA)" by makel_e
CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL THE WINNERS
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