Nobody Compares To You (Niall Horan) Watty Awards 2013 (Currently editing)

Chapter 13

In honour of almost reaching 20000 reads and being ranked 41st in Teen Fiction and 45th in Fan Fiction,I have decided to post the next chapter!!!

I can't believe that I got so many comments on my last chapter and find out all the places that my lovely fans are from!!

I understand that you want me to keep updating but I have 2 little girls that I have to look after, a house that needs to be kept clean (which has been a bit neglected since I have started to write this story) I am trying to update as much as possible, but my family must come first! So if I ask for a ridiclous amount of votes I am sorry but you all just vote so quickly I was not getting to spend anytime with my kids and I usually don't make you wait more then a couple of days anyway even if I don't get all the votes! Thanks!

I am going to ask for 200 Votes again!!

This chapter is dedicated to my one of my best friends in the whole wide world, who was very sick yesterday! Sorry I couldn't get the chapter out for you yesterday Kylz!! Love you

Ok so I have rambled on long enough I think.....

Enjoy!!

LOUIS

I could feel Darcie shaking in my arms, she was terrified. I was as well and as I looked at the rest of the boys faces, I could tell they were too.

 Liam was typing frantically on his phone, probably making Paul aware of the situation.  

We had put ourselves in a really bad situation, but I was glad that we were here. What if Darcie had been here on her own or with Jaimie. I shook my head trying to forget even thinking about it. I had to put my mind back to now, not what could have happened.

 How were we going to get out of here?  A few minutes later there was another knock on the door.

“This is Constable David Johns, is there anyone in here.” I heard a voice say.

We sat there for a minute looking at each other, then I saw Liam shrug. He started to stand up.

“Liam, I will go.” Darcie said loudly, she broke loose of my grip and before I knew it she had reached the door.

“DARCIE, don’t we will check.” I screamed at her. If anything happened to her I would never forgive myself and I don’t thing Niall would forgive us either.

“It's ok; I am no one if they shoot me no one will care.” She said as she opened the door cautiously. I saw the relief on her face as the police man walked inside.

“Are you kids ok?” he asked looking around the room as everyone else started to get off the floor. I ran my hands through my hair releasing my breath. I hadn’t been aware that I was holding my breath. I stood up and looked over to the cop.

“Yeah we are. Is he gone?”  I asked

The policeman nodded. “We had a standoff right outside your door, He has been shot, He is still outside your room though.” Constable John looked at us boys. “We are going to have to get you boys out of here before the media get here” he said recognizing us. “Do you have any security with you?”