Bummed Out In The Funhouse

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(This is a test, critique me so I know how to make this show. It was made adult last minute)
Camera zooms in at a carnival as our heroes enter a funhouse

Fleegle:hasn't this been fun gang?

Drooper:why sure it has!

Snorky:*honks*

Bingo:Snorky says it's been the most fun time ever, and so do I!

Fleegle:I'm glad we haven't been locked in this carnival and forced to find out who did it!

*the carnival all shuts down*

Fleegle:Aw come on!

Drooper:YIKES *hugs bingo and shivers *

Bingo:*looks at his watch * it's been more than a half a second, how the *bleep* is Snorky not freaking out?

Snorky:*slowly realizes he's stuck then starts running around in circles while honking loudly *

Bingo:quit it squirt! *grabs him by the tail*

Drooper:*demonic screech * what are we gonna do?

Fleegle:nothing, because nothing bad is gonna happen!

*the lights go out *

Fleegle:AW COME ON!

Bingo:......nice eyes fleegle

Fleegle:......t-thanks

Drooper:......wait a minute, there's 10 eyes!

Fleegle:oh no-

*the lights go on to reveal an animatronic clown *

Clown:*raises is hands up *

The Splits:*scream *

Fleegle:LET'S SPLIT!

Bingo:you mean split up?

Fleegle:we ain't scooby doo!

Bingo:or are we?

Fleegle:JUST STOP AND RUN!

Bingo:ok! *runs into a mirror * well I tried

Fleegle:OH YOU LITTLE! *picks him up and gets away *

Drooper:*runs off and gets away *

Snorky:*honks like mad and runs off *

Clown:*chases Snorky *

Snorky:*honks and run into a mirror thinking it was a way out, causing birds to fly around his head *

Clown:*laughs *

Fade out
Fade in

Drooper:WOW! A commercial break!

Fleegle:wait, where's Snorky been through that

Bingo:oh no

Drooper:son of a- *a tile under him flips *

Fleegle:oh no! The censors got him!

Bingo:what?! *another tile flips under him *

Fleegle:oh no...... *a tile flips under him *

Bingo:*splats on to the ground * OW!

Fleegle:*falls splat down too * OOF

Drooper:*gracefully falls down *

Fleegle:*is bleeding from his nose * I think I need the doc....just kidding *hops back up * Where's snork?

Bingo:he's.....umm..........

Fleegle:oh no.......SNORKY! *runs off * SNORKY! BUDDY!

Snorky:*honking loudly *

Clown:oh, you p-poor thing haha!

Fleegle:*tackles * YOU GET THE *bleep* AWAY FROM MY SON!

Clown:ow.....

Fleegle:NOW! *rips the clown's head off * LET'S SEE WHO YOU REALLY ARE

Muttley:oh you caught me

Fleegle:why do you hate him so?

Muttley:eh, rivalry

Fleegle:I see....not

Bingo:HAHA! Two dogs...although one's cuter than the other-

Fleegle:bingo no

Drooper:how do we end this?

Fleegle:that's all folks?

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