Knight in shining armor (yoomin)

The beginning- 1 rewritten

   Possible trigger warning: brief mentions of  implied self harm
     17 year old Yoongi Min sat in his hospital bed, bandage wrapped wrists, staring at his lap. He had been admitted to the pediatric ward 2 hours ago for severe depression and was put on self harm watch. He lapsed.
     But right now he just wanted something to steal his mind from his thoughts...  Suddenly the door of his room slid open, he looked up to find an out of breath boy that seemed around his age.. He was a cute boy.
   The mysterious boy turned around, his arm was in a sling and he stammered "OH- I'm- I'm so sorry I don't know someone was in here- I was uh- hiding from the nurse-". Yoongi cut the boy off with a laugh, something that was new for him.
     The mysterious boy stood in aw. The boy on the bed was beautiful.  "Well welcome Mr. Mysterious, this is my lovely room" he laughed "my name's Yoongi, I'm 17".
   The boy blushed at the nickname, "my uh name's Jimin, I'm 16". "Nice to meet you Jimin", Yoongi smiled "if I can ask why are you in here though..?" .
     Jimin chuckled nervously and brung his casted right arm up behind his head to scratch his nape... "Well I uh am running away from the nurse" . 
     "Are you running from Nurse Jennie?" , laughed Yoongi. "Yes- wait- how did you know?", Jimin replied, nearly astonished the beautiful boy read his mind. 
    "I've been here a few times before, trust me, everyone runs from her at least once", Yoongi chuckled with a lopsided grin. Jimin smiled sweetly, "well nice to know I'm not the only one that runs from her, so um can I say in here and hide?".  "Sure, why not? company would be appreciated", The boy on the bed said, crossing his legs in front of him and patting the spot in front of him.
   The two boys sat across from each other and talked. And talked, about school, about their favorite movies, about their dreams.
    After 4 hours Jimin was discharged. He left with a cat drawn on his cast and a crush on the hospital boy that happens  to go to his school.
    Yoongi was left on his bed with a warm feeling in his heart. 4 hours of talking and not once did Jimin ask about why his wrists were wrapped or why a nurse walked in every 30 minutes. That's how he knew Jimin was special. Some random boy that ran into his room was already so important to him. Yoongi hoped this wasn't a dream.
    He realized it was real when he moved is leg to find a number scribbled on a piece of spare gauze.
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