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My biggest apologies for such a late release of the results! I've been a little busy lately, and the late release is entirely my fault; the judge submitted them on time, and I've just been a mess. Thank you again for judging, _littlemeow7!
The following are the results with the winner at the very bottom. We hope you continue to write in our prompt contest as the weeks go on! The points gained by everyone will be reflected in the Phoenicia's Points Shop where you can begin redeeming prizes if you'd like or you can bank the points until you drop out or the overall competition ends.
The plot was cute and fluffy. However, the introduction felt like an interview which doesn't work in writing stories, especially 1st pov since the characters are supposed to show their daily life instead of saying it to the readers. That needs to be noted. Else, grammatical errors were seen which can be helped and I personally liked the plot.
The introduction was simple but when I noticed the thoughts and narration of Emily mixed without clear separation, I was confused. The plot was unexpected and could be better if it had a more settled description since it felt rushed. A few grammatical errors were seen as well but can be edited. Overall, quite good.
The writing was brief and fluffy, which was quite cute. I like the use of french compliments by the author and in the piece, I noticed that the thoughts and narration of the characters were mixed while using 3rd pov and wanted to advice the author to use italics, mostly in a sentence to seldom convey the character's thoughts since the narration is being done by an anonymous person (author).
The plot kind of seemed confusing because at first it seemed like Jo was supposed to be dragged for the date by Lisa. The idea was new but execution seemed somehow weak but worth the shot. A few grammatical errors were noticed but they can be edited out. Last tip, try using italics for thoughts to keep the narration separate and neat.
I simply loved the writing. It was simple, raw and exemplefied an ample amount of fun. With limit of words I understand that the piece seemed a bit rushed. At first I was confused if Quinn was a guy or girl since the name is used for both genders, but the doubt got clarified in the end.
The story was really interesting and written in a sentimental way. I expected the guy to show up but the ending made me happy for a reason that Parvati didn't had to wait for a guy to be happy. Great job!
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winners:
There are two this time, both with perfect scores!
This piece was absolutely amazing. Simply written by well explained, I love how the whole plot was explained throughout the conversation exchange between Sally and Felix. Despite the word limit, I appreciate how the author made very good use of each sentence to convey the authenticity of the plot.
I thoroughly enjoyed the piece. It felt like a part of a longer novel and I was enticed. The dating memory was a common trope, but the execution was neat and touching which made it all better. Loved it.
