Chapter 1-The Introduction and Land Of Waves Arcs

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Legend;
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Mindscape characters

Jutsu
Hn (Translations)
Time and/or Place and/or Battle
"'Flashbacks'"
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FYI
*Sasuke is a Yuhi and has their red eyes.
*Konohamaru and everyone the same age as him are a year younger and Hanabi is in the same class as Konohamaru.
*Tenten is Sakura's adopted sister.
*One more thing I know this is going to be controversial to some of you but Hokage>Hakage and there's a new village that will be the new land of fire and Konoha will be the land of Leaves.
*Guy's Team is 2 years older than Team 7 instead of 1yr
*I've changed it so that the Chunin Exams happen once every two years
*The Sanin are all 6 years older so that a certain something that is revealed later can make sense
*There Are ten Biju roaming the world;

*Guy's Team is 2 years older than Team 7 instead of 1yr*I've changed it so that the Chunin Exams happen once every two years*The Sanin are all 6 years older so that a certain something that is revealed later can make sense*There Are ten Biju roami...

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*The Ten-Tails is now called the Zero Tails as it consumed the tails from all the tailed beasts as nourishment.
*The reason Lee can't use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu is because his hand are physically unable to perform the nessasary hand sign patterns
*This means everything else is pretty much the same;

Sakura's Introduction
After her introduction, she says "I do have one other thing I want, I want to be strong like my big sister, she's two years in front of me but I'll catch up" as Sakura looks to the sky and Sasuke looks at her with a twitch of disgust, feels remorse and then sympathy. Sakura notices & flashbacks;

"'Mom! Dad! I graduated!" shouts Tenten rushing into the house to find no one there but Sakura.

"Congratulations Onnechan!🤩" shouts Sakura as she thinks 'My Onnechan is awesome!' with a fire burning in her eyes.

Tenten pats her on the head and says "Thanks Sakura, where are Mom and Dad?"

"They went out," says Sakura.

"Well, that's fine I guess 😥," says Tenten.

"They'll be back soon to congratulate you soon," says Sakura.

"No they won't 😒, they didn't really want this for me but with my abilities what else can I do?" says Tenten.

"You're a great cook! You need to teach me some time," says Sakura.

"Yeah, let's get started," says Tenten as she guides Sakura's hands as Sakura cuts some vegetables when Tenten sees a picture of the family, everyone but her in it as she raises her hands and grabs it and her eye twitches in anger as Sakura cuts herself by accident and Tenten says "Careful Sakura...here" as she puts Sakura's hand under cold water with Sakura having tears in her eyes.

"I'm sorry😥," says Sakura as Tenten bandages her finger.

"It's all right, I'll handle the cooking, you don't need to learn it straight away," says Tenten as she prepares the food.'"

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