OT7 RESULTS

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Hello everyone. I'm back with all the judgements of the books.

It's okay if you didn't win because there plenty of fish out there in the sea so keep working hard✨

So, here they are~

Note: The caps ones are the host's judgements.

Judge: rabisworld02
Book: Daechiwtha: Myth of the Benders
Author: Armylachi

Cover: 2.5/5
Blurb: 7/10
Title: 3/5
Plot: 18/20
Grammar: 18.5/20
Creativity: 4/5
Writing style: 14/15
Emotions: 13/15
Reader's enjoyment: 4/5
Total: 91/100

A few words: The cover seems a fanart but it's beautiful and catchy. However the picture used is not high quality and it's affecting its beauty, use better fonts as well. The title is too long as well. After that, I think the blurb you used is not something which would. watch the reader's attention. It's simple without any interesting things. Creativity amazed me. I have seen many people trying this type of theme even though they are less in number. But you did a great job in pulling this off. Your grammar is good and vocabulary is also good. But I felt the pace a little fast. I couldn't feel the emotions at the right places. Your writing style was confusing, even in the blurb.
However I still enjoyed the book.

❝₊˚✨—1st

-Judge: Miraculous31
-Book: Love In A Sinking Realm
-Author: AngieMeros

-Cover (5):
3
The Cover is neat and gives an idea of the late 19th century. The title is displayed neatly and is visible to the eyes.
NEEDS TO BE OT7.

-Title (5):
4.5
The title gives an idea of the setting of the obstacles they will be facing in the story. The title does suit the story line and is original.
-Blurb (10):
6
POOR EXECUTION.

-Plot (20):
17
One of the most excellent plots I have read. The plot has an ancient vibe, and is filled with distinct setbacks of the characters, without giving away their names at the beginning, and letting the reader discover them, by learning more about each of the characters portrayed. The setting goes back in the 19th century, and the plot revolves around the main character, Selenya, who faces the obstacles of the future with the prince, and his six bastard brothers. It is an interesting book, which makes you go back to reading it again and again.
REVOLVES AROUND SEOKJIN MOSTLY.

-Characters and Emotions (15):
14
The Emotions and characters are well described. It is almost as if you are living the character. The picturesque description makes you go to places in the book. The characters have been well established. The writing places you into the setback of the mentioned scene.

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