Sunset Paradise: Rewritten

Adventures in Supervising

INT. AURI'S HOUSE - MEGGY AND WHISK'S ROOM - MORNING

(The morning after the previous episode, Whisk and Meggy are seen sleeping peacefully in their beds, Meggy lying normally, Whisk curled up like a cat. Suddenly, Auri pops up.)

Auri: GOOD MORNING, PARTNERS! :D (Both freak out. Whisk goes flying out of bed, landing on all fours, and Meggy slides out, pulling the blanket with her.) It's time to start the day! Let's get looking for some CRIMINALS! I wonder what danger's out there today. Maybe we should have breakfast first. OOOOH! Or do you guys work out first? You decide I'm too excited to pick!

(Both get off the floor.)

Meggy: Auri (Yawning) What time is it?

Auri: Not too early. It's only six o'clock.

Whisk: Can't we just sleep for a few more hours???

Auri: Sorry, ladies. Out here, crime never sleeps. So neither do we! (Both groan) I'll get us some breakfast. Hope you guys like potatoes! (Running downstairs as he says offscreen "or is that too soon." The two look down where he's going.)

Whisk: It's too early in the morning for me...

Meggy: No kidding...

(Transitions to the three of them eating breakfast at Auri's kitchen table.)

Auri: Now then, I'd like to start off with mapping out where we're gonna go. (He lays out a map on the table as the group eats.) I figure we'd start with the flea market, since I bet someone would plant something sneaky over there, y'know a few bombs maybe. (Meggy nods as she eats but turns to notice Whisk, her face close to the plate sniffing and her hands on the table with her fingers curled, resembling paws. Meggy looks back to Auri.) Then we could snake our way up to the amusement park. I know it's usually not open till 10 but, I got my season pass, don't worry. THEN we could check the beaches. I don't usually trust crabs because of how they like to sneak up on people. Wish there was a police unit for them as well. (Meggy looks back at Whisk to notice her lapping up her milk out of the cup. She notices Meggy watching and then slowly puts her cup down, sweating.) Now then, any questions?

Meggy: Oh uh...what was the first part of the plan again?

Whisk: And...what was the second and third?

Auri: Ah I can answer all those on the way. Let's go on out before the sun rises.

Meggy: Waiiit just a minute, Sheriff.

Auri: Huh?

Meggy: It's...nice and all waking up early like this but...do you actually know how to defend yourself? Yesterday was a mess with me and Debra having to clean up after you like that.

Auri: Oh yeah! I got a spear! CHARGE!

(Auri seems to charge at a wall with his half-broken spear, but trips and falls on his face before he gets there.)

Meggy: ...I think we're gonna need a little more work before we go out hunting, Sheriff.

Auri: (Getting up) Yeah, I guess you're right....Ooh! You two could be my supervisors! :D

Whisk: Your...what?

Meggy: I think he means mentors.

Whisk: MENTOR? B-but...what can I teach??? I don't know anything...uhhh....(Looks around nervously) I'm not that reliable...