The Autumn Awards Season 1 (CLOSED)

🌹 Best Blurb Results 🌹

Hello and good afternoon, participants! 🤗❤

Thank you to our dearest judge Araxxie for taking her precious time to read and judge the books!

Without further ado, here are the results for Best Blurb entries:

#1

Title: Fetish
Author: izastateofmind
Score: 7.5% 
Feedback/Critique: 

The blurb is actually good and satisfying but the way you delivered it, it's like a paragraph on a chapter. 

Sa blurb/description pa lang ng story mo ay madaling ma-predict ang mga posibleng mangyayari sa story mo. Sana, may plano ka for that because your genre here is Mystery-Thriller, which is kailangan mo talagang mapanagutan. Wala naman akong masyadong concern doon dahil it's your choice kung aayusin mo iyon but I suggest, don't spill your main goal sa description in revealing way, try to be more secretive para hindi nila agad isipin na ganito ang magiging daloy ng story na iyan. 

Spill the bomb when they are not ready. *wink*

So, I've seen some errors in using proper spacings. 
 
After the period (.) is one space lang ang ilalagay mo hindi na magdo-doble.

"Ika nga, sa ganitong klase ng trabaho dapat ay matibay ang sikmura.  Maayos naman…" 

See? Ganito ang ginawa mo.  

Nagkakaroon ng confusion at minsan ay masakit sa mata lalo na sa mata nang mambabasa ang double spacings. Try to adjust your routine here, practice makes the things turn out well. Matuto ka lang nang matuto. Magbasa nang magbasa. 

Sa grammar/ spelling naman, wala naman akong napansin. Nagagamit mo sa wasto ang pinagkaiba ng 'din at rin', 'kung at kong' at 'iyon at iyun'. Magandang bagay iyon dahil ang iba ay nahihirapan doon at alam kong matututuhan din nila iyon. 

Keep Writing a Masterpiece, Hermosa/Hermoso. 

Adios! 

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# 2

Title: Uncovered Cases
Author: LORAINEJD
Score: 8%
Feedback/Critique: 

Your way on how you delivered your blurb is pretty common but it slayed so thumbs up for that. 

But, It didn't caught me, I felt the cheerful tone on the last line/paragraph of the blurb, it's not wrong, okay? But it's kinda cliché. Is that a Mystery-Comedy? If ganyan ang genre ay pasok na pasok siya riyan. Having a cliché and common description is not wrong, okay? Don't misinterpret me here. 

Having a common blurb is challenging because It's your choice on how, where and when will you apply your reserves spice for that story, right? To be unique and to spread silently to your readers that you have the fire of 'uniqueness'. 

I suggest din na medyo nagmumukhang mahaba ang blurb mo dahil sa limpak na gem achievements mo roon, Congrats pala roon! 

Why don't you try to make a chapter for that GEM ACHIEVEMENTS para mas maayos tignan ang blurb bar mo? Sa first page at last page, puwede. It's just a suggestion, okay? The decision is yours. Neatness in Writing is a must. 

Overall, the blurb was good. The punctuation marks are used in proper and correct way, so thumbs up. Padayon! 

Keep Writing a Masterpiece, Hermoso/Hermosa.