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~Second Review: Alpha~

Heyo guys! It's Krypto here with the second review.

I will be reviewing @MagicTrio's book, Alpha.

And just because she is a friend of mine doesn't mean that will change my opinions.

This book is an Omegaverse AU and a ship between Alpha!America and Omega!Arthur, or in this case Alfred and Arthur because they are not countries.

First off, descriptive details. They're written excellently and you've added pictures for a perfectly clear mental image, which is good.

Then there is the POV. It stays third person the whole time, mostly to Arthur. And that's also good because changing the POV in the middle of the story is not a good thing to do.

Then there's the account of OOC...I enjoy the way you do Alfred, swinging from serious to carefree quickly. Arthur is well in character as well.

Though on a side note, I believe Alfred should be a bit more of a jokester. Maybe pulling a prank or two on Arthur or even joking around with him like with *wink wink nudge nudge* kind of stuff.

The plot line is interesting, but a bit dull as of the moment. I do not doubt that it will get more exciting as it moves along.

Over all I would rate this either a 7.5 or 8 out of 10.