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~Fifth Review: The Pasta Games~

Admin Marchie here ^^ I'm back with another review, The Pasta Games by PurpleSoulEater.

Okay, now, I'm really a good fan of Hetalia, and somewhat good fan of the Hunger Games. Well... as much as... well, let's not get into that!

However, while the grammar and mechanics were somewhat well, I found that the story, despite being a croover of Hetalia and the Hunger Games, it relates too close to the actual book by Suzanne Collins. If I'm not mistaken, it seems like all you did was change the names, and change a couple of actions to resemble the people better.

I mean, I know that there are lots of people who are giant fans of the Hunger Games and Hetalia as well, but This seems more like all you did was rewrite the Hunger Games and make the central protagonists Canada and Prussia.

Also, I'm not a big fan of PruCan. However I won't let that blind my review simply because I dislike a certain ship.

However, with that said, I repeat once more, while the mechanics and grammar are good, of course they are, al you most likely did was retype the actual book. Correct me if I'm wrong, but it seriously seems like all you did was just recount the Hunger Games in general, for there is no way to call it a fan fiction, more just a retelling.

Overall, I give this story a 5.5/10. It lacks a little bit of creativity, and simply, isn't super original... Please tell me if my spottings are wrong, but this is what it seems like.