Hey guys! Krypto here. I'll be reviewing The Little Sunflower by NyKera14
The Little Sunflower is a short story about Ivan, who you all know as our lovable Russia, and his life as a country. He makes friends with his Nyotalia counterpart Anya who is just a simple human. Then after she dies, out of the blue, comes Madagascar.
Over all, for the story, I believe it could have been a lot better. There was hardly any description and the chapters were rather short.
The usage of punctuation wasn't very good.
Madagascar is also a canon character for those of you who don't know and was recently introduced in the manga. In this story, she is simply an OC.
I believe you could have made your OCs reasonings for being in Russia more clear. And why she wanted to be friends as well.
It's not every day someone comes up and asks 'hey you wanna be my friend?' randomly.
No.
That's not how human nature works.
But over all, I believe the plot was pretty cute. Good plot, could have been better written.
And for that reason, I'm going to rate this book a 5/10.
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