~Jasper~
This is a really strong jealousy spiral moment 😮🔥 — it just needed to feel more Jasper:
• less explosive chaos, more controlled anger cracking underneath
• deeper internal conflict (he KNOWS he's wrong)
• smoother flow + emotional weight
• remove anything too obvious and make it more subtle/intense
I've expanded it and grounded it in his character 👇
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✍️ Rewritten + Expanded Version (Jasper POV)
Jasper
I couldn't sit still.
The office felt too small.
Too quiet.
Too full of thoughts I didn't want.
So I paced.
Back and forth.
Hands clasped behind my back, then through my hair, then back again—like if I just kept moving, I wouldn't have to think.
But that didn't work.
It never did.
—
She was late.
That shouldn't have mattered.
It never had before.
Lexi had always managed her own time, and she'd never once given me a reason to question it.
She always got the work done.
Always.
So why did today feel different?
Why did it irritate me?
Why did it—
I stopped pacing, exhaling sharply.
Because she was with him.
That's why.
—
Dale.
Of all people.
—
I let out a quiet, humourless breath, shaking my head.
"This is ridiculous," I muttered.
I had no right to feel like this.
None.
I made it clear.
I told her exactly where she stood.
Friends.
Nothing more.
So what did I expect?
That she wouldn't move on?
That she wouldn't see anyone else?
That Dale—who had clearly taken an interest—would just ignore her?
Unrealistic.
Unreasonable.
And yet—
—
My hand tightened around the edge of the desk.
I could still picture it.
Her walking back in.
Calm.
Unbothered.
Like nothing had shifted.
Like she hadn't just spent hours with him.
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