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i looked into his dark brown eyes, urgently searching for any signs of bitter farewell. and when his warm hands crept up to frame my face, i realized that i had been crying. his face leaned closer, head tilted forward, expression pleading. i gave in, tears falling faster now. our lips moved feverishly, almost greedy for each other. as i pulled away, my heart pounded painfully. 

gasping, i said, "when you leave, know that i'll always love you."

his eyes flashed angrily. wildly. despairingly. "why can't you believe me? i won't leave you."  

how desperately i wished that were true, as the lovely boy faded from my sight. leaving me in a blank puddle of numbness, hunched over on the floor. 

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i just know that i'll need to edit this because i use too many commas 😃

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