First of all love you AdyaYadav you didnt see my message but personally i love your story so just thought to wright a little bit from it personally loved that so want to show it here and request to all read it also
Susheela: chalo sabko room dikha deti hu fir kal india chalte h
Alisa: main soch rahi hu main bhi india chali jao ab vise bhi susheela tere saath 1 mahina ho gya family miss kar rahi hogi
Susheela: thik h toh sab chalte h kal wapis
Pramod tumhara kamra mere side main hi h..... Or agni garima tum iss kamre main
Agnima: pramod ka kamra saath me... Humara alag
Susheela: aise bol rahe ho jaise ghar se bhar bhej a h are 2 kadam chaloge pahuch jaoge..... Waise kya aaj main dhruv ke saath so jao
Agni: ye koi kehne ki baat h vaise tere or dhruv ke 3 rishte h
Pramod: wo kaise
Agni: pehla toh ye ki tu garima ki behan h tih mausi bhanje ka dusra ab teri or pramod ki shaadi hogi toh chachi bhatije ka
Sumod: or dusra
Garima: tu agni ki behan h toh bhua bhatije ka bhi toh
Susheela: haa baat toh sahi h...... And hugs agni
Pramod: kabhi mujhe bhi hug de diya karo
Garima: koi nahi devar ji aapki bhabhi h na
Pramod: that's like my bhabhi
And 4 of them hugSusheela: chalo sab so jao
Agnima goes in their room and pramod goes in his room amd susheela with dhruvSusheela one hand was on dhruv and someome knock the dorr she open and find pramod there and pramod locks the door and pin her to the wall
Susheela: ke kar rahe ho
Pramod: shhhhhhhh...... Itne time baad mili ho pure 2 saal ho gaye aapko dekhe
Susheela: dhruv dekh lega
Pramod: uski taraf dekho pehle so raha h vo or bacha h usse kya pata
Susheela: tohh tu
Pramod came close to her and kiss her and broke after 10 minutes
Susheela: i love you
Pramod: i love you too and hugs........ Susheela turns back and saw dhruv laughing
Pramod: dekha hum saath main kitne cute lagte h dekho wo bhi hus raha h........ Ab toh mer se shaadi karlo
Susheela: i promise ghar jake pakka sabse baat karenge
Pramod: promise
Susheela: hanuman ji promise
Pramod: waise aapke liye ek gift h
Susheela: kya
Pramod: piche mudiye
Susheela turns back and pramod sides her hairSame as shown in the show and wears her a locket
Susheela: bhot sundar h
Pramod: mer se bhi zyaada
Susheela: nahi
Pramod: ab ek kiss...... Toh do
Susheela: oh bullet ruko main promise karti hu ghar jaake ek puri raat tumhare saath rahungi but not now samjhe
Pramod: ok..... Ab apne dono promise yaad rakhna
Susheela: ha ha.....
Pramod: yahi so jao
Susheela: so jao waise bhi humare bich main dhruv hoga
Pramod: shitt...... But it's ok i will manage
Susheela: chale soneIn morning
Susheela and pramod one hand on dhruv and sleeping
Agni: garima chalo unhe uthake aate h flight miss ho jayegi varna
Garima: haa chalo......... Both surprised but happy
Agni: pramod yaha kaise
Garima: wo chodo yeh saath main kitne cute lagte h na
Agni: wo toh
Garima: in future dhruv ki jagha inka baby hoga...... And both laughs
Sumod: hum jag rahe h
Agnima: sorry.... Ready ho jao
Susheel: thik h main fresh ho jati hu or tum apne room main jake fresh ho jao
Pramod: ok
Garima: la dhruv ko de main isse bhi nhila deti hu
Susheela: haaAfter all done they lock the door and go to the airport in flight
Pramod: susheela ji
Susheela: haa bolo
Pramod: you trust me na
Susheela: ha....... Par kyu
Pramod: aise hi
Susheela: waise ghar pe sab kaise
Pramod: sab ache hi h mom dad all good
Susheela: or papa mummy
Pramod: hmm. Vo mujhe nahi pata
Susheela: matlab
Pramod: matlab.. Yeh ki aapke ghar se jaane ke baad dp ji na saara kasoor mom dad pe daal diya tha ki unki vajah se aap bhaagi ho ki wo aapko force karte the
Susheela: or garima ne kuch na kaha
Pramod: bhabhi ne toh bhot manaya par........... Or dhruv hone pe bhi nahi aaye the vo kabhi kabhar chup chal puttu aajata h sabse milne bina bataye
Susheela: na meri vajah se itna hua h
Pramod: leave it....... Or yeh socho ki shaadi ke liye kaise manaoge
Susheela: tum so jao main soch lungi
Pramod: thik h............ And sleeps on susheela shoulder
Susheela: kita cute h mera langoor abhi bhi
Pramod: aankhen band h meri abhi bhi jaga hu dheere bolo
susheela: na so jao chup chap or sochne do1 hour later
Susheela also sleeps and her head was on pramod head
Agnima: haye nazar na lag jaye
Agni: saali sahiba or bro utho
Pramod: susheela ji sone dijiye
Agni:oh susheela ke pile bhai hu tera
Pramod: sorry bro galti se..... pahuch gaye
Garima: haa
Susheela excitedly: finally sab se milungi
Garima towards pramod: aap ne bataya nahi
Pramod: bata diya bhabhi
Agni: chalo aajaoAt chautala nivaas
Minni: jay gate kholo koi h
Jay: yes....... Aaya
Jay:are susheela beta
Minni: susheela aa gyi......... hi kaisi ho
Susheela: bhot achi hu aunty or aap
Minni: main bhi achi hu...... Aao andar
Jay: are mera dhruv aagya.... Aao sab
Minni: waise susheela tum yu chali kyu gayi hume batadeti hum solve karte
Susheela: aunty main pramod ko problem main nahi dekh sakti thi na
Pramod to susheela slowly: promise yaad h na pucho ab
Susheela: hmm....... Waise aunty uncle ek baat bolo
Mijay: ye of course
Susheela: mujhe or pramod ko shaadi karni h
Minni: wo toh hume pata h
Susheela: mera matlab ki papa ko kaun manayega
Jay: beta tention mat lo h ek plan h........ ... agni idhar aa
Agni: haa dad
Jay: sun................................. .......... ......................
Agni: bhot risky h papa
Jay: main dp ko jaanta hu man jayega
Agni: toh thik h fir aaj hi shuru karte h
Minni: ho gyi khusur pusur
Agni: haa...... Or ab plan suno saare.....................
Sumod: nahi...
Garima: ke hua dono kyu bole
Prmaod: mera matlab iss jhuth se baat bigad sakti h
Susheela: bilkul sahi
Minni: we can try
Sumod: ok..... Kya karna hMeanwhile
Pramod call dp
Dp: na chanchal uthaiyo kiska phone h
Ccc: ji bhaisaab...... Hello miss world chanchal kaatelal ruhail speaking
Pramod: are chachi ji aap
Ccc: na dr. Saab lagta h galat ghar main phone kar diya
Pramod: ji nahi dp ji se baat karva dijiye
Ccc: aisi ke baat h beta jo chachi se chupa rahe ho
Dp: kiska phone h chanchal
Ccc: dr. Saab ka bhaisaab
Dp: dr. Saab kaun
Ccc: are pramod
Dp: na kaat de phone
Ccc: bol rahe h kuch ki bhot zaroori h....... jaan khatre mainh
Dp: dikha.... Hello
Pramod: na dp ji susheela ji ka pata lag gaya or woh yahi h delhi main hospitalized h
Dp: kya hua susheela ko
Pramod: wo........ Wo...........Kal milenge bye
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Meri Jaan Season 1✨
General Fictionthis story is inspired by a tv show name kaatelal and sons. it mostly focus on the most loved couple sumod. paras arora/pramod chautala, jiya shankar/susheela katelal ruhail. this story is totaly different from the show but some scenes and the name...