Meri Jaan Season 1✨

pramod kiska h susheela ka ya kirti ka

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Kirti: naa ruko...... Agar susheela chali jayegi toh main toh akeli pad jaungi in sab baado main
Garima: na kirti main hu na tere saath
Pramod: haa or 4 din ki hi baat h fir hum dono aa jayenge
Kirti: thik h enjoy.....
Everyone: byee
Sumod: 👋 bye

Outside the house

Pramod: na susheela ji 4 ghante drive karna h  ok
Susheela: thik h
Both start the drive in car
Susheela turn on the music and it was 'ek hazaro main meri behna h'
Pramod change it and it turns 'oh mere dil ke chaen chaen aaye mere dil ko'
Susheela again turn it on previous both fight on the sounds and the car hits a big tree fastly

Susheela: aah....... Na drive kar rahe ho ya plain uda rahe ho
Pramod: aapki vajah se hi hua h madam..... Kisna kaha tha gaane badalne ko
Susheela: toh tum vo gaaana nahi sun sakte the......... Ab itni raat ko kha jayenge  padal
Pramod: are yaar lift mangte h
Susheela: raat ko kaun lift dega..... Bevkoof
Pramod: toh chalna start karte h or kahi ruk jayenge
Both start walking and finds a haveli

Suheela: na yoh haveli band padi h yaha stay karte h
Pramod: haa thik h yaha ruk jate h subha mechanic ko bula lenge
Susheela: hmmm ib andar chalo
Pramod: ha ha chaliye

Both go inside and finds light close susheela turns the light on but it doesn't on

Pramod: na su..su....Susheela ji yaha itna andhera kyu h
Susheela starts laughing: na tum toh bade darpok nikale
Pramod: main or dar nahi matlab haa..... Voh sab chodo par mujhe mat chodna plzz
Susheela:thik h darpoookkkk
Pramod: are susheela ji cockroach
Susheela screams and jumps in pramod arm
Susheela: kaha h
Pramod laugh: na itne andhera main mujhe tum thik se nahi dikh rahi toh vo pidhi se cockroach kaha dikhega
Susheela: tum bhi na...... And walks
Pramod: are gussa mat ho
Susheela: wo sab toh thik h par ek problem h.......... Bhot bhook lagi h
Pramod: itni si baat are yaar dekho....... Mom ne parathe diye the ki raste main kha lena par hum toh gaye nahi toh yahi kha lete h
Susheela: jaldi do
Pramod take paratha from his bag and susheela snatch it
Pramod: are ye kya tha mujhe bhi khana h
Susheela: are yaar lo kha lo
Both eat their dinner
Pramod: soyenge kaha
Susheela: hmm.......... Iss sofe pe thik h tum idhar or main idhar
Pramod: thik h
They both sleep in midnight susheela listen some voice
Susheela: na yoh kaisi aawaj thi...... Pramod pramod utho.......... And she takes out the blanket
Susheela: na pramod kaha gaya pramod..... Pra
Someone with a mask put knife on susheela's neck
Susheela: na kaun ho shakal toh dikhao apni
Someone: aaj main tushe mar dunga..... Tera pramod toh gaya ib teri baari
Susheela: matlab...... Kaha h mera pramod kya kiya tune and she starts crying

Chautala nivaas

Bhua: kirti call kar na pramod ko puch kaha h
Kirti: kab se call kar rahi hu switch off h...... Susheela ka bhi try kiya par uska phone bhi switch off h
Bhua: mujhe toh lagta h us susheela ne hi pramod ko kuch kaha hoga
Kirti: ha...... Mujhe bhi yahi lagta h..... Ek kaam karti hu main bhi thodi der main nikalti hu
Bhua: thik h ja

In haveli

Susheela was crying after listening about pramod
Susheela: na mujhe chod or bata pramod kaha h
Someone: piche dekh vo khoon dikh raha h....... Ab samjh ja
Susheela: na kya........ And she shouts pramod name
Someone: are itna mat ro...... Sorry sorry
Suheela: kya sorry laga rakha h
He takes out the mask and saw pramod and she hugs him
Pramod: sorry susheela ji mazaak tha
Susheela: na itni raat ko itna badha mazaak kaun karta h
Pramod: sorry
And she broke the hug
Susheela: na or yeh khoon kiska h
Pramod: .........
Susheela: louder: bolo
Pramod: wo...wo.... Sauce h
Susheela: sauce..... Wo kaha se aayi or yeh chaako jo tumne meri gardan main pe rakha kuch ho jata toh
Pramod: nakli h
Susheela: what..... Or yeh costume kaha se aayi
Pramod: yeh sab ghar se laya tha
Susheela: na tumne matlab pehle se plan kar rakha tha ki mujhe daroge
Pramod: sorry
Susheela: chup raho
Pramod starts fake crying
Pramod: meri susheela ji ko meri padi hi nahi h...... Yu nahi mazaak samjh ke maaf karde
Susheela: oh melodrama band karo....... Kiya maaf ab aake so jao
Pramod hugs her: thank you..... And love you
Susheela while broking the hug: i love you too but agli baar se asa mazaak mat karna samjhe
Pramod: pakka..... Chalo ab so jao
Susheela: hmmm

Chautala nivaas

Kirti: acha toh main chalti hu by aunty
Bhua: bye...bye or jaldi ja
Minni: na kaha ja rahi h kirti beta
Bhua: na wo..... Wo isse office se kuch kaam h out of town jana padega
Minni: ohh...... Bye and best of luck
Kirti: yes...... Yes...... Aunty thank you
Bhua: jaldi ja late ho jayegi
Kirti: ha.... Ha bye..... And walks away

In morning

Kirti: what....... Can you check again name is susheela and pramod........ They had check in here
receptionist: no mam........... There is no name
Kirti: toh kaha gaye yeh dono..... Aunty ko call karti hu
Bhua: haa kirti bol........ Pahuch gayi mil gaye dono
Kirti: nahi aunty nahi mile......... Yaha kal se ab tak kisine bhi check in nahi kiya h....... Mujhe toh lagta woh chalo susheela hi pramod ko kahi le gayi ho gi
Bhua: sahi bol rahi h humara gaye se pramod aa gya hoga uske jhaase main

In haveli

Pramod wake up and saw susheela is not there
Pramod: susheela ji....... Susheela ji...... Kaha ho
Susheela: na kyu chila rahe ho...... Yahi hu
Pramod: kaha gayi thi aap
Susheela: are chai lene gayi thi..... Pass main hi ek dhaba tha raat ko andhere ke karan dikha nahi... Lo piyo chai
Pramod: thank you.......

Kal milenge 😉
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