She woke up and see the whole room was decorated with rose petals and saw a chit
Susheela gm i am in my ofc kuch important work tha isliye or ha 12 baje tak aa jaunga and raat ko jo hua so i thought not to disturb you isliye chup chal aa gya aap ke liye waha ek dress rakhi h pehan lo alina apne friend ke ghar hayi h 2 baje aayegi mom NGO gayi h or dad yaha hospital main h ok byeSusheela smiles and saw the dress it was red colour gown she go and change herself and came to hall and saw the time
Susheela: na 11 baj gaye pramod ek ghante main aata hoga pakka breakfast banake gaya hoga kha leti hu
She eat the breakfast wash the plates do se work and start watching her phone in the hall suddenly lights off
Susheela: na yoh light kaise chali gayi aaj ab kya karu tch dekh kar aati hu
Pramod: rehne do
Susheela: pramod tum.... 12 baj gaye or andhera kyu kar rakha h mujhe tum bhi nahi dikh rahe ho
Pramod: wait my jaan
Lights on and she saw pramod on knees holding a rose
Pramod: happy rose day my love
Susheela: tumhe yaad tha thank you
She takes the rose and make him stand. Pramod take her in bridal style and go towards their room and make her sit on his laps
Pramod: so Mrs's pramod chautala kaisa laga aapko room decoration
Susheela: hmmm..... Acha h
Pramod: bus acha h
Susheela: nahi bhot acha h
Pramod: bus
Susheela: toh kya chahte ho
Pramod: you know what i want
Susheela: na katai na bilkul na chup chap baithe raho
Pramod: plzzzz and makes a puppy face
Susheela: yeh cheating h yaar.... Acha thik h but only one
Pramod: ggood
She kiss him on cheeks
Pramod: not fair
Susheela: tumne bus kiss mangi thi yeh nahi bola tha kaha samjhe
She ran from their
Pramod laughs a bit: kya susheela tum bhi na........ Alina ka time ho gya aati hogi
Door bell rings
Susheela opens the door
Susheela: heyy ali
Alina: hi mom
Alina ran to sumod room
Alina: paaaaaa..... Yeh kya h pura room decorated or aap yaha kaise
Pramod: wo.. Wo.. Wo princess aaj ofc main kaam nahi tha isliye or yeh room toh aapka surprise h
Alina: mere liye par kyu
Pramod: happy rose day to you my princess
Alina: thank you papa both hug each other
Susheela: ho gya dono baap beti ka
Pramod: yes
Alina: mum i want to say something
Susheela: ha bolo
Alina camr to her and kiss her
Alina: i love you mum
Susheela: ily 2 mera beta
Alina: meri taraf se aapke liye rose happy rose day to you
Susheela: same to you bacha and kiss her
Alina: chalo main toh chali you both enjoy
Pramod: he!!!!
She goes from there
Susheela: kaha se sikh rahi h yeh
Pramod: pata nahi chodo waise susheela i was thinking ki kahi ghumne chalte h na
Susheel: hmm thik h batao kaha jaoge
Pramod: ek kaam karte h kitne din se mummy papa ke nahi gaye chalte h or puttu anushka se bhi mil lenge fir aate time dinner bahar
Susheela: nice idea main alina ko bolti hu ready ho jaye
Pramod: okkSusheela: alinaaa..... Alinaaaa kaha ho
Alina: mumma idhar hu washroom main
Susheela: kya kar rahi ho
Alina: mumma change kar rahi hu nanu nani ke ghar jaana h na
Susheela: tumhe kisne kaha
Alina: hehe sorry aapki baate sun rahi thi
Susheela: tum humari baatein sunti ho
Alina: ab wo.... Wo... Toh kabhi kabhi sorry
Susheela: bhar aao pata nahi kitni badi ho gayi h na aaj bahar aao main batati hu
Susheela was wearing a saaree sumod is ready in hall
Pramod: kaha h aapki beti
Susheela: pata nahi mujhe
Pramod: kyu kya hua fir se dono maUKn jhagda ho gaya kya
Susheela:.......
Alina: main aa gyi and remembers what susheela said that she will not leave her she ran and hide behind pramod
Pramod: kya hua beta
Alina: wo na pehle toh sorry kabhi kabhi main aapke room ke bahar se aapki baatein sun leti hu or abhi bacha lo mumma ko pata lag gaya gusse main h
Pramod: ohh toh yeh hua h pehle toh alina bad manners baat nahi sunte kissi ki or sushee
Susheela laughs
Alina whisoers in pramod ears: mumma ko koi daura waura pada h kya
Pramod laughs a bit: chup
Alina: kya hua mumma huss kyu rahe ho
Susheela: alina tum kitni cute ho tumhe laga main itni si baat ke liye tumhe daatungi... Oh god
She takes alina in her arms
Susheela: iti si baat ke liye kyu daatungi budhu
Alina kiss her
Alina: love you mumma
Susheela: love you too mera bacha
Pramod: chale
Susheela: ha chalo
In car sumod in front alina at back
Alina: mumma papa ne bataya tha ki aap na papa pe bhot gussa karti ho kyu bhala
Susheela: he!!
Pramod: alina sabke samne nahi batana tha budhu
Alina: upss sorry papa
Susheela: na maine kab tumhe daata or tum alina ko yeh sab batate ho kyu
Pramod: what i am saying yeh toh bachi h kush bhi bol rahi h aap shodo na
Susheela: waah waah waah ab yeh bachi h
Pramod: chodo na lo ghar aa gya
Susheela: hmm.... Ghar aa gya
All go inside the house
Dp: are bacho tum sab yaha aao andar
Ccc: na aa gyi susheela rani
Susheela: kyu chatur chanchal chachi na sakti ke mai
Ccc: na mera matlab toh you tha (mumbling) ki ab aa gyi h ab bhaisaab mushpe hukum chalyenge (loudly) ki bina bataein aa gyi pehle batai toh kuch taiyaari karke rakhte na
Dp: na toh chanchal taiyaari toh ab bhi ho sake h ja chai pakode bana
Chacha: ha bhaisaab main abhi samose or pakode banata hu
Dp glares
Chacha: na bhaisaab chai na banaunga
Ccc in mind: kaha tha na maine ki ab hukum chalayenge chodo ek mera pati h bhola bhandari lakshman 24 ghante apne ram bhai ki seva karta rehta h or ek mera bhola bhala sa beta
Kusum came from inside: are susheela pramod alina aap sab yaha
Pramod: ji mummy bhot din ho gye the toh socha ki dono ko yaha ghumane le aao
Kusum: acha kiya aa gya
Alina: choti nani chote nanu khade rahoge yah chai pakode bhi laoge
Sumod: shhh aise baat nahi karte
Ccc: hanji beta ji abhi layi 2 min bus
In mind: lo beti ne bhi naukar bana rakha h
Kusum: na chanchal tu sab se baat kar main jati hu
Ccc: na waise toh jiji main jati na par aap itna force kar rahe ho toh thik h bhar baith jati hu
After a while
Susheela: waise chachi ji putrapal kaatelal ruhail na dikh rahe
Ccc: pata nahi aaj kal apne phone main ghusa rehta h
Pramod slowly: pakka apni anushka se bast karta hoga
Susheela: ke bole tum kaun anushka
Pramod: koi nahi susheela koi nahi
Puttu came from stairs while talking on phone
Puttu: ya love you baby
All stares at him puttu notice
Puttu: i mean love you love you bro
Ccc: beta kaunse bro se love you bol raha h
Puttu: wo mummy wo...... Agni bro agni bro se wo gaye h na relative ke ghar toh phone aaya toh bro se bol raha tha
Dp: la meri bhi baat kara de
Puttu: tauji tauji phone disconnected
Dp: koi baat nahi
All talk sumod and alina go to restraunt at night came to home and sleepGoing to make Valentine's week so be ready
Pre: propose day
Target: 40
Word count: 1289
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Meri Jaan Season 1✨
General Fictionthis story is inspired by a tv show name kaatelal and sons. it mostly focus on the most loved couple sumod. paras arora/pramod chautala, jiya shankar/susheela katelal ruhail. this story is totaly different from the show but some scenes and the name...