Not so great Nate

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I slowly opened my eyes, my head aching as I shifted it tot take in my surroundings. I was laying on the dirt ground covered in a heavy cloth that I assume was a cloak, because I mean what idiot would carry a blanket this heavy around with them other than to keep warm. The cool breeze and shade bearing over my like night it's self indicated that I was still deep with in the cursed forest. I turned my head and found my self eye level with a big flat fluffy rabbit. So I did what any sane person would do (not saying that I am sane), I shrieked and bolted upward instantly regretting the dession. My head screamed at me, my body ached as pain ran up and down my veins, the still somewhat reasonable voice in my head chasted me for my stupidity.

"I wouldn't recommend doing that anymore, it probably hurts and it's not going to do you any good giving yourself heart attacks." A voice chuckled at me from my left.

"No kidding Sherlock. Ow holy sweet mother of unicorns this hurts," I grunted to him like any well mannered sofistocated noble queen would do.

"I did know a man named Sherlcok, lucky man. He got to travel the world with a circus performing ever where they went. Oh and sorry, it's just you quite an odd sight."

"Well thanks for that brilliant observation. Where am I any way?" I slowly rose hoping not to injure myself yet again and my own lack of grace. I glanced around and saw that the 'gentelman' who was laugh to my humiliation, was the same young man I saw sleeping while I was being chased by rabbis animals. Such fond memories.

"Really, you coming screaming through the forest like a mad women, waking me up from my much needed nap and yet you haven't got a clue as to where you are?" I frowned, he acted as if he knew everything and she was just a stupid peasant girl. Well I guess the peasant girl was slightly acturate because of her current wear, but stupid! That was just plain rude.

"Well, as you already noticed I was being chased by rabid animals. So before you insult me can I at least know the name of the person how insist on making fun of my misfortune."

"Nathaniel Roberts mi-lady, but everyone calls me Nathaniel the Great." I glared at him. The nerve of this man!

"Okay so the last part was a lie, but the ladies love it," he wiggled his eye brows at me like a stupid fool, " but every one does call me Nate."

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Hey guys,

So I know it's been a while since I last posted, sorry but I was having major writers block! But it finally got the next chapter up. Keep in mind that these are rough drafts, and I am always open to suggestions. Thanks to pink_gurrrlll and irshwisch I now sort of have a plan for the story. Would love feed back and any new ideas, thanks! 😜

-pinkrainbow12

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