STARTING A NEW LIFE TOGETHER (ON HOLD)

Tip ....Tip

Hi guys😁,
Ok I'm not good in English or Hindi but giving a try.Do comment weather it's good or bad and do tell me what to improve.

The story starts just after Raavi's fabulous performance on..'tip tip barsa pani' to manaofy her boothnath.
Let's start

Even though raavi was able to make her efforts effect shiva, he was in much anger and pain.The pain that is visible in his eyes ,voice and action.Pain of sudden shock of getting divorced from the love of his life with a false accusation of domestic violence ,which was unexpected. Raavi is able to understand his pain ...his shock and that he is hurt very very badly....the reason why she still puts efforts in manaofying him ignoring the tauntings and hurtful words of suman and shiva.

Presently,shiva is in disbelief.His chipkali gave him divorce and within few minutes she confessed her love for him.A sudden change in Raavi which he was unable to digest.where did it come from ? Is she playing with his emotions ? Or is she doing all this because of her never ending love for pandya parivar? He has many questions and doubts ,answer to which he is still  searching.

He did melted due to her continuous efforts but suddenly the thought of raavi giving divorce to him flushed into his mind which made him push her away.

SHIVA:Ey chod mujhe...chod (shiva started to shout at her ) . Ey maami ki behen ki beti , kya bakwas kar raha he tu ...pura angan ko swimming pool bana diya.Yeh kya naya drama he..haa..batha...

But raavi keeps on adoring him while he shouts .She finds him extremely handsome even while he he angry.

SHIVA: Tu nahi bathayegi ? Ey..dhyan se sun.. teri ye faltu  ka  Shakira  wala performance dekhke main pigalne nahi wala...samji...Tho bandh ker yey natak.
Wese bhi kahan se aagayi achanak tujhe mujhpe ithna pyar ? Tere yeh acting skills dekhke na ..shayad bhabhi aur gombi pighal gaye honge lekin mujhe unke jaise math soch. Aur yeh sab na tu teri us naagin behen aur maasi ke samne kar ....bohot thaliyan bajayegi tere liye....chal jaa...

RAAVI : Yeh acting nahi  hain shiva...naahi mere pyar achanak koi asman se tootkar giri hain..Mera tere liye pyar bohot pehle hi tha ,bas ehsaas hone keliye disha aana pada.Phir bhi nahi samaj paya ...aur jab ehsaas ho gaya tho tujhe bata bhi nahi paya...( She said with a sad smile) ...lekin ab bhatha bhi diya ..to piche nahi hatne wali..Tu kitna bhi kahe ki tu mujse nafrat karthi ho lekin main apne pyar par har nahi maanegi..khabhi nahi....(she declared)

SHIVA: Dekh...humara talak ho gaya hain ... aur talak karwane wali tuu....Hamara talak karwake ..mujhe keh rahi hain hai ki tu mujhe pyar karti hain...aur main teri vishwas karu? ( A lonely tear comes out of his eyes) ...mujhe bewakoof samaj kar rakha hain kya?...

Saying this he stormed out of the house.But raavi was hell determined to win his love.she quickly cleaned all the mess and changed herself to her usual cloths .Shiva drove to his place of solace ....to his lonely tree...and his mind now continuously thinking about his chipkali and her performance ...and how she tried to seduce him.He spent a lot of time trying to analyse the situation but  miserably failed . Unable to get an answer he went to the store.

Soon all the family members were back and they sensed nothing strange.Raavi was an expert in managing housecores and  managed to clean the angan within less time.The day went as usual with one change....now raavi backanswering suman within seconds of her tautings.

Today also shiva stayed at the store.But raavi took dinner for him  and as yesterday he refused to eat and chased raavi out of the store.As  soon as he finds that she is gone...he secretly starts to eat the dinner....Raavi feeling bad about shiva sleeping alone in the store goes back only to find the eyepleasing event before her....her boothnath eating all the tasty food she made😋 like a hungry kid...and heard him saying while eating..

SHIVA:Kithna bi kahe ki main ise nafrat kartha hoon lekin iski banaye huve khane ko hon karega nafrat....

RAAVI:(In her mind ) aww...kitna cute lagrahahe Mera boothnath....ise aise hi dekhke rahne ki man kar raha hain...and starts adoring him..

Shiva notices her and thinks " lag gayi Lanka  ...yeh abhi thak kyu nahi gayi" and spits out the food which brings  back raavi from her imaginary world...and he says loudly...

SHIVA: "Eh...baghvwaan yeh kesa khana bheja hain is bhootni ne ..ithna kadwa ki mara bhoot bhi mar jaye iske kadwapan ke wajah se...chi."...and acts as if washing his mouth with hands...

Raavi feels a little sad and goes out of the store only to meet a good looking but dangerous dog infront of her...she strated shouting for shiva...

RAAVI : Shiva mujhe bacha ...ye dekh kutha ..mujhe ese dekh raha hain jaise main iska lover ko mara hain....ey ...shu...shu...jaa yahan se...jaa...

SHIVA: Ha...dekh ab..yeh kutte ko bhi teri chudail jaisi chehra pasand nahi aayi....( With a smirk on his face)

After a lot of pleading at last shiva chases the dog and raavi started going toward the pandya niwas...Shiva looked at his wife going back to the house ...as she disappears from his site ..he started to feel a bit concerned for her...he follows her secretly until he finds that she safely reached pandya niwas...and then he heads towards the store.....

Ok....this is my first try....do comment guys I like to know what I have to improve...😁❤️.bye....