Losing Jordan

Hey everyone, please give this story a go. It is my first Wattpad story so I would definitely like some feedback. I really hope you enjoy :)

Jordan has lived a hard life. Chucked out of her home at age 12, starved in the streets and worst of all, lost her little brother. A lot of people would have given up by now, but not Jordan, She is a survivor. Getting a job at the local restaurant was just the beginning to her new life. A life without pain and suffering, a fresh start ... or so she thought