Galtiyan Episode 1

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Veer:Nahi Kaka aap aisa nahi bol sakte... please Kaka mujhe meri galti ka ehsaas ho gaya... please

RK:Ab kuchh nahi ho sakta kunwarsa...Rani bitiya ab aapki zindagi se kaafi door jaa chuki hai

Veer:Kaka do mahine ho gaye... please

RK:Apne toh kaha bhi tha ki aap Rani ka saath kabhi nahi chhodenge...phir bhi usko chhodkar Jaipur chale gaye...aakhir kitni baar aap humari bachhi ka dil dukha paate...usko aapse bahut door bhej diya hai humne kunwarsa...

Veer:Kaka mein bebas tha...Ranisa ke aage kuchh nahi bol paya

RK:Jo aadmi apni patni ka saath nahi de sakta...woh kaisa pati

Veer: Please Kaka mujhe Rani ka pata bata dijiye...mein mar jaaunga Rani ke bina

RK: Yeh sab filmi baaton ke liye der ho gayi hai kunwarsa...aap ne nahi dekha ki aapki accident ki khabar se kitna tut gayi thi meri bachhi...aur aapne ek baar bhi usse milne bhi zaroori nahi samjha

Vikram: Kaka aap toh samjhiye...Dekhiye bro ki kya halat ho gayi
RK: Ekbar humri bachhi ki halat Sochi thi Jaipur jaate waqt...apne bhi toh nahi roka tha chhote kunwarsa

Veer looked at Vikram perplexed

Flashback

Veer: Mujhe aapke saath aana hi nahi tha...mein itna bura kaise ho gaya ki apni Rani ko chhod kar aa gaya... jabki aapne hamesha mujhe apne matlab ke liye istamal kiya hai

(After coming back to Jaipur and recovering there was not a single moment when Veer recounted his moments with Rani ...with each passing day his wounds freshened as Rani neither called him back or receiving his call)
Veer: Itna bhi kya gussa ki mere se iss halat mein bhi baat nahi karna chahti aap
He started drinking and his deteriorating condition also tensed Rajmata Dikvijay and Vikram...Ranisa was also tensed that she was loosing control on Veer every other day as he considered her responsible for their separation...hence she started sowing seeds of doubt in Veer's mind that Rani didn't Love him

Ranisa: Dekho Veer woh ladki ko sirf tumhare naam se matlab tha
Veer: Bas Kijiye aap...Rani mujhse pyaar karti hai...woh bas thodi naraz hai...maan jayengi

Ranisa:Pyaar kounsa pyaar...tum marne ki kagar par the...woh aayi?? ab kahan gaya uska pyaar...my foot

Veer:Ranisa!!!!

Ranisa:Tum uss do koudi ki Naukrani ke liye humpe chillaoge
Veer: Rani pehle sirf meri patni thi...Ab mera pyaar hai...unke khilaf ek shabd nahi sun sakta
Ranisa: Haan jaise tum anath ho...pata nahi kiska ganda khoon ho...dikvijay ke najayaz aulad...naukrani ki aulad...waise woh bhi naukar ki beti hai...aakhir apni aukat dikha di tumne
This 'Najayaz' word was enough to shatter Veer's heart... already he was tangled in clutches of self remorse this simply added salt to his wounds...

...he stood up from the floor... and the wine bottle dropped from his sweaty hands...tears have dried on his face and dark eye patches were making him look more miserable..

Veer: Aapne aaj tak jo bhi diya hai... usse soot samet lautaunga...Kitne paise aaj tak mujhpe kharch kiye hai boliye...
Ranisa: Kahan se laaoge...tumhari jo tankha hai..tumhara hospital sab kuch humara hai...nikal jaao mere ghar se...itna sab karne ke baad bhi humko bol rahe ho uss Naukrani ke liye
Meanwhile others came to the room
Dikvijay:Yeh tum kya bol rahi ho Rajeshwari apne bete ko ghar se nikal rahi ho....yeh tumhara apna beta hai

Ranisa:What nonsense...ab apne paap humare sir pe mat thopiye... I know ki yeh aapka Najayaz beta hai

Rajmata: Rajeshwari...poori baat bina jaane aapne itni badi baat kah daali...

Veer dragged his feet outside the room...he was barely able to move his body partly due to slow recovery from fractures and partly due to effect of alcohol... Vikram tried to stop him but to no avail...
Dikvijay held him by shoulders
Dikvijay: Veer tum iss ghar ke bade bete ho...
Veer: Haan...aapka Najayaz beta....kyon dad kyon...kyon itni badi baat chhipayi mujhse...pehle kyon nahi bola
Dikvijay: Beta tum Najayaz nahi ho...yeh tumhara ghar hai

Veer started sobbing and brushed Dikvijay's hands
Veer: Sab mujhse aaj tak jhooth bolte aa rahe hai...sirf ek Meri Rani thi...jinko mein Balliya mein chhod ke aa gaya

Dikvijay: Hum Rani ko le aayenge wapas mere bachhe
Vikram: Bro chill...mein khud jaakar Bhabhisa ko le aaunga
Veer: Nahi ab aur nahi... itni badi galti mujhse kaise ho gayi...mein literally akele chhod aaya unko balliya mein...yeh jaante hue ki wahan ke log kaisa behave kiye the unke sath pichhle baar...apni galti ka ehsaas hote bhi kitne waadein kiye the unse...phir bhi unko akela chhod aaya mein
Vikram: Bhabhisa ko Balliya jaakr le aayenge bro
Veer : Mujhe abhi jana hai
Vikram: Aap toh theek se chal bhi nahi sakte bro...mein aapko le kar jaaunga...
Veer: Toh abhi chaliye Vikram...jitna der karenge... Dooriyan utni badhti jaayengi...do mahine beet gaye hain...

Vikram looked furiously at Ranisa...then gulped down and ultimately told Veer the truth
Vikram: Aapka pyaar sachha hai bro...warna yeh aapko sedatives de rahi thi... mentally unstable rakhne ke liye...
Veer looked at Vikram furiously
Veer: Aur aapko yeh sab pata tha aur aapne kuch nahi kiya
Vikram: Mujhe aaj hi pata chala bro...kyonki meine inko aapke paani mein sedatives milate hue dekh liya...aur test ke liye pani ka sample bhej tha...she was trying to control you bro
Ranisa was not affected with anything...she was smirking all the time when Rajmata slapped her hard...
Ranisa: Rajmata.....
Rajmata: Apne guroor mein aap apne hi bete ko nuksaan pahucha rahi thi
Ranisa: Yeh nahi hai hamara beta
Rajmata: Yeh aapka aur Ranvijay ka beta hai
And this was enough to shoot Ranisa's BP high...she almost fainted when Dikvijay caught her... and nodded his head
Ranisa was frozen for a moment.... Veer had managed to reach the hall by that time.. and his condition was not that good to be able to listen anything clearly(Dikvijay told Ranisa the entire back story)...

Before Veer could reach the main door... somebody held his hands
Ranisa: Ruk jaao beta...
But he jerked her off....
He ignored her repeated pleading... she tried to stop him by holding his foot but he simply stopped her and vanished from the door as she sat on the floor crying her heart out... Rajmata hugged her...but to no avail

Ranisa: Agar hume pehle yeh sab pata hota toh hum apne bete ke saath aisa kabhi nahi karte...pehli jagah hum apne bete ke liye Kiara jaisi ladki bhi nahi dekhte...humara beta 😭❤️

Flashback ends

Veer looked at Vikram perplexed
Veer: Kaka kya bol rahe hain... batayiye Vikram

Vikram: Haan bro galti meri bhi hai...jab aapko hosh aaya tha meine Bhabhisa ko phone bhi kiya tha... Bhabhisa bhi aapse milna chahti thi..pata chala ki unko kisine yeh bol diya tha ki aapko Jaipur shift kiye hai....par jab meine unko Balliya hospital aane ke liye bola toh Ranisa ne unhe milne se mana kar diya...aur mujhe aapki kasam de di ki aapko na batau...
Veer: Vikram...apne bhi humko andhere mein rakha...hum aapke bharose rahte the aur aap...
Vikram: Mein aapse bahut pyaar karta hoon bro...aapko Ranisa nuksaan na pahunchaye isliye nahi bole
Veer: aajse aap pe dobara bharosa nahi kar sakte hum Vikram

RK: Jis ghar mein koi bhi humari beti ki nahi parwah karta...jis parivaar ke log apnon se hi sach chhipate hai...uss daldal mein koun pita apni beti ko kaise bheje...Yahan tak ki Hukum ya Rajmata bhi uske baare mein ek baar nahi puchhe...
Veer: Kaka I promise ek baar Rani mere paas aa jaye unhe lekar alag rahunga Mein.. please Kaka
Vikram: Bro...aap aise kyon bol rahe hain
Veer struggled at Rani's door...but Ramukaka turned deaf ear to his pleading... he was technically right as a father
RK: Aap soch lijiye ki Rani mar gayi aapke liye...Hume ab Shaanti se jeene dijiye...

Veer dropped on his knees...did she really left him or it was actually him who left her???

To be continued....

Precap:New technocrat at Rawatbhata  Nuclear Project ( Yeh kya hai search kar lena)

Ranawat 🖤

Special thanks to shristibhageria

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