NEWTMAS 4 LIFE!!!!!

RESULTS!!!!!!!!!

HELLO GUYS
WOW THOSE STORIES WERE AMAZING!!!!!!! LITERALLY FABULOUS
Some I shed a tear and others I balled my eyes out!!!!! 😭😭😭😭yes like the emoji
Right so I'm going to do some small feedback on all the stories and say what I like and all the klunking!!!!

But first shout out to the contestants:
_Newts_limp_

Gangster_Sangster

emma_and_orlando

thecrazyfangirl123

All of you guys were amazing. and I have decided to do a joint third cause I just COULD NOT DECIDE!!!!!!!

Well I'm gonna do feedback now, starting in no particular order......

_Newts_limp_ : " my tommy "

WOWED ME TO THE MOON AND BACK!!!!

Right this story was really touching and bought tears to my eyes, it is also the classic "please Tommy please" thing. it really tore me apart but made me laugh too.

"Sir? Honey I'm a crank"
Haha it sass it funny but also rather sad cause yeah reminding the reader that newt is a crank.

What also touched me was how our blonde angel killed then realised what he had done. It just made me plain sad.

I loved how you did a Thomas POV cause most people just leave it at newts POV.

And probably the worst part was,

" I walked back thinking about my future without newt, my newt "

That reared me up inside and I just couldn't imagine how Thomas must have felt in this story.

Amazing job well done!!!!!

NEXT

thecrazyfangirl123 : Alone

WOWZERZ IN SHUCKING TROUSERS!!!!

This story was unique because it was after Newts death, which was unexpected and amazingly done.

The reaction and all from Minho and Thomas were very well written and made me extremely upset.

I loved how thomas broke down shouting at Minho telling him about newts limp and all it was very upsetting..... well done

The bits like
"Please newt come back" were the things the got me crying cause it was so heart felt and me just could not cope.

Saddest line for me:

" I should've told him, now he will never know,"

And then Thomas ends it to be with Newt which was just beautiful. Now they will be forever together.

Wonderful job

NEXT

emma_and_orlando : You'll never know me.

ABSOLUTELY B E A U T I F U L!!

This was different cause u no different place and all.

It was very descriptive about the characters.

"Dude, I'm so sorry for you he is like the weirdest weirdo in a weirdland"

Things like this made me laugh so much.