My Immortal --- With Commentary

My Immortal: Chapter One

Chapter 1.

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik)No, i don't. i really don't. 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. #RavenIsIlliterate U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX! A worthy argument, however have you considered..... Phantom Of The Opera? It's just as emo, AND some of those fanfictions are ACTUALLY WORTH READING

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Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears (what are limpid tears) and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!). I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. (gerard butler i read at first) I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. (EDWARD) I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them. 

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was.... Draco Malfoy! (dun dun dunnn)

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly. (what is this, a Y/N fic?)

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

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AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz! it's not.