This is my first story so constructive critisim is accepted c; Luff ya x .
Chap.1
“Amanda, Erica, Wake up. You gotta go to school!” Mellissa shouted. I Jumped surprised to not see Erica beside me. We share a bed its King size so we have enough space.
“Erica!” I called, just to find her in the bathroom doing her make-up. She’s so pretty she has dark brown hair with gold highlights, and a golden tan, my skin was pale.
“One minute” she replied. I rushed out the door, I couldn’t wait, and I had to be at school early on the first day. When I reached school I was surprised to see Erica there before me. I was going to sit by her but she was with her crew I didn’t want to embarrass her. RING!! The bell of first period rang. Mrs. Edwards, the intimidating English teacher, gestured her hand forward for me to come to the front of the class.
“Everyone, I would like to introduce-“She paused wanting me to say my name. I don’t know anybody in this class except Erica; I could set up a nickname for myself. Something cool, sleek, short!
“Mandie.” I spoke; Erica looked up at me and smiled. I walked back down to my seat.
“Class, make sure to finish your poems by Friday” the bell rang and the students rushed out the door. School was almost over the day seemed to drag on boringly all throughout the day. I waited for Erica at the fountains in front of the school were most students sat and talked among each other. Group of girls walked past me as I sat and waited. The girls were whispering and laughing, I was hoping not at me. As they walked past one in the middle said
“Nice Socks!” sarcastically, and they all laughed. I dropped my head in embarrassment, also looking at my crazy multicolored socks. I looked around to see if anybody else had heard the girl’s remark. As I looked around I saw others chuckling and some staring at me. Erica was in a group with the boys who were chuckling. I was so embarrassed. I started to walk home without Erica; I thought she would catch up later.
“Hey Hun, so how was school?” I looked at my mom I didn’t want her to worry so I just said
“Fine.” Once I was in my room I dove into the king size bed and screamed into my pillow. I lifted up my head and felt the moisture of my tears on the pillow. I’ll start over tomorrow. I wiped my tears and sat up. Erica opened the door and sat next to me; she could tell I was sad, she played with my ponytail.
“I’m sorry about that girl, Jessie, she’s like that sometimes. But to be honest those socks were kinda funny” we both laughed.
“ Thanks” I said.
“I’m going to ask your mom if we could go shopping, k?” I nodded and we both went to ask mom.
