Don't just use the word moan it dose not give the character's whole expression there in like the previous chapter the point is that your giving the charaters expression like example when there happy use words like she would smile at him while making cookies but if you just use one word like moan your not giving the reader the full expression
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tips on how to make a good smut story
Randomdo you sometimes think that "man I wish I could write smut" well these tips can help you know what's best and do-s and don't s of making smut this is emikas guide on making smut