Chapter 1

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It was eight thirty in the evening and Max began to get tired. He and his mom had shopped all day, and the thought of another store made Max grumpy.

"One last gift and we'll be through for the day," said mom

"One last gift and I'll be asleep!" said Max

"Can't we finish our shopping tommorow?" asked Max

"If you like," said mom

"But our last stop is a toy store." said Max

Max thought that it might not be so bad after all. They entered the store, Mom with her list and Max with his eyes wide open. Suddenly, Max had an idea!

Max now had a chance to play the new action video game. While his mom was shopping, Max darted away. He knew he was not supposed to leave his mother's side, but he just had to see thar video. Max walked toward the video section. Everyone looked very tall as he walked alone.

The salesman asked Max if he needed any help.

"Just looking," Max replied.

He had heard his mom say those words many times. He found tha action video and started playing. Suddenly he was not feeling tired anymore; his eyes were wide open.

Then he heard strange, scratchy voice saying, "Hey kid, come on in here!"
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VOTE
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COMMENT
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FOLLOW
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thank you
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by:nourene

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