Kiara Flames by 99problemstosolve
Blurb- 23/25
Concept check- 21/25
44/50
Review-
I don't get much of the concept but I must say it's interesting. There are many character line mistakes which are not avoidable. I'd say to the author that they should confirm the character script. There's only little for the author to improve. First of all, confirm the character scripts, it's really confusing and readers are also commenting to correct the character scripts. The manuscript of a character is totally based on the Author to do. If it gets mixed up, doesn't align with what is being done in the scene, then it doesn't have a good base. And also between the reviewing I was really bored, so I would recommend to spice up the plot with many other things of what the author can come up to, of course the author's decision if they want to otherwise I'd recommend to spice up the plot.
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