Hello guys. Im working on the new chapter of the Makoto Artoria book aswell as this! Hope you like this!

PS. Sorry for a short chapter..had nothing to think of

July,5,2017

We see makoto in an apartment with shirou emiya sitting down in a chair

Makoto:"You like Huey Lewis And The News?"

Shirou:"They're Okay"

Makoto walks off but still talks to shirou

Makoto:"Their Early work was alittle "New Wave" For my taste but when sports came out in '83 i think they really came on their own. Commercially and Artisticly"

Makoto walks off into the bathroom

Makoto:"The whole album has a clear crisp sound! And a new sheen of consummate professionalism. It really gives the songs a big boost!"

He puts on a Raincoat and takes a couple of anti depressant pills and also picks up an axe laying in the bathroom. He goes outside of the bathroom moonwalking while talking to shirou and placing the axe in the kitchen

Makoto:"He's been compared to Elvis Costello but i think huey has a far more Bitter and Cynical sense of humour!"

Shirou looks back at Makoto and talks to him

Shirou:"Hey yuki.."

Makoto:"Yes Shirou?"

Shirou:"why are there copies of the style section of the newspaper on the floor..? Your sister got a dog? A chow or something..? Hahahaha"

Shirou laughs

Makoto:"No,Shirou!"

Shirou:"Is that a rain coat?"

Shirou points at makoto while he's zipping up the rain coat

Makoto:"Yes,It Is!"

Makoto Walks towards the stereo and clicks play on the music

Makoto:"In '87. He points towards the stereo he released this! Fore. Their most accomplished album! I think their undispiuted masterpiece is 'Hip to be Square' a song so catchy most people probably dont listen to the lyrics!"

Makoto grabs the axe out of the kitchen

Makoto:"But they should! Because its not just about pleasures of conformity! And the importance of trends! But its also a personal statement about the band itself!"

Makoto raises the axe above Shirou

Makoto:"Hey Emiya!"

Shirou looks behind him to see makoto holding an axe above his head.

Makoto:"RAAAAH!"

Then makoto swings it forward hitting shirous shoulder and his body falls forward towards the papers

Makoto:"TRY FLIRTING WITH MY WIFE AGAIN YOU FUCKING STUPID BASTARD!"

Makoto swings the Axe forward again hitting his back. He swings again hitting his spine. He swings again hitting his neck making it spurt out blood into his face

Makoto:"YOU FUCKING BASTARD!!"

he swings a couple of more times before dropping the axe with one last swing. He breaths slowly as he takes off his rain coat and takes a seat on the couch.

He pulls out a beer bottle and drinks it while looking at shirous dead body while smirking..

To be never continued

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