Finally luna comes

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Twilight POV: I've been spending time with Nightmare all day now and whenever we are around other ponies she becomes fearful but when it was just us she seemed nice I think I'm getting closer to her and finding Luna after a few more hours I hope she'll raise the sun for at least an hour or two. We were preparing for the coronation she had set up for us it was a nice thought but I didn't want to rule with her but I need to find Luna in there so I'm just gonna go with it. It felt a little weird she was doing my mane and tail. The coronation is in a couple hours so we were prepping now I wanted to be ready early so that I could talk to my friends about my progress. She finished my mane and tail and we both put our dresses that we designed then sent in to the dress makers to make it look a little better and make them. After we were done I had my friends meet me in my room. When I got there they gasped
"Darling who made that dress you look simply wonderful what is the occasion" Rarity fangirled I laughed
"Well the occasion is the coronation that's in like twenty minutes and I better get back to Nightmare I'm getting so close to finding Luna so I wanna get back." I explained then I left.
So I went back and she looked different I saw her face soften as she saw me not only that but her eyes there was something different about them I recognized them they were those kind, compassionate, caring, fun, pleading eyes begging for forgiveness with one look I didn't know what to say it truly amazed me
"Uhhh....Luna is that you?" I asked hesitantly
"Twilight oh twilight please forgive me I can't fight her she's too strong I'm stuck as her around other ponies and when I'm alone but with you I'm me but only when we're alone I beg forgiveness from you and Celestia there's nothing that can be done." She pleaded I could tell that really wanted forgiveness.
"It's not your fault Luna I know that and I'm sure so does Celestia." I comforted her she looked so upset. Then she started to cry.
"No Twilight you don't know what I did to her she'll never forgive me I know it. The worst part is even though I can be free and be me around you I can't around her. So I can't even apologize to her." At this point she was basically wailing.
"I can do it for you I can tell anything for you I just need to know where she is." That has to help in some way it has to. She snuffled and then calmed down and says
"Okay she's in the deepest part of the dungeon and she hasn't gotten food since I took over Nightmare put a guard outside the door he will only allow the the highest of power in which I guess would include you but you can't be how you normally are you have to be regal and commanding if he says no you have to be offended. You should go after the coronation so that your power is official and you have more time. Can you bring her some food." She went from wailing to panicking and I was happy to do this for her I need to see Celestia anyway but the coronation is in like two minutes so we teleported there and she was Nightmare again due to the other ponies being around.
"Hello my beloved ponies I give you me as your queen and Twilight as queen as well. We have equal power and because I want you to survive and keep food growing here is the sun soak it up you have two hours of it to work in start." She said looks like Luna did get some control long enough to raise the sun thank Celestia. Then we teleported back to the room and she sent me with food to go see Celestia.
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