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Sorrelpaw (EXAMPLE)

My OC. This is where the owner's username will go when I publish the actual reviews.

Name: Sorrelpaw

Past name(s): Sorrelkit

Future name(s): Sorrelcloud

Reasoning behind OC's name: Sorrel - her mother named Sorrelpaw after her mother, Sorrelstem. Cloud - Sorrelpaw's fur is very fluffy, like a cloud.

I like the reasoning behind the prefix, it's not uncommon for cats to name their kits after old, important cats. The suffix makes a lot of sense based on her appearance.

Gender: She-cat

Pronouns: She/her, they/them.

Age: 8 1/2 moons.

No comment.

Clan: ShadowClan.

Rank: Warrior apprentice.

ShadowClan is a cool Clan, I've always liked it. Warrior apprentice OCs are rather fun to develop.

Sexuality: Bisexual.

Cool!

Description: Sorrelpaw is a small, well-muscled she-cat. Her fur is gray and tawny, with white patches. It is knotted and medium length. She has a round face with round yellow eyes. She has a lilting voice and a flowery scent. She also has fluffy fur, like a cloud. Sorrelpaw's front left leg is broken, so her training has been postponed until it heals. Her right shoulder has a small scar on it.

An interesting appearance, I can imagine how she looks quite well! How did her leg get injured?

(I'm not judging on realism.)

Personality: Sorrelpaw values honesty the most. She is slightly more extroverted. In conversations, she is eloquent, charismatic and unfriendly. She is guided by her head, often level-headed and collected. Her world view is slightly more optimistic. She is fair (or attempts to be), disciplined, irreligious, soft, intolerant and small-thinking. Sorrelpaw is clever, which reflects in her decisions, skills and conversations. She tends to avoid eye contact with others for some reason. If she manages to hold eye contact with another cat, they are likely very special to her. Sorrelpaw's opinions are easily swayed, but she speaks about them often. She is far too young to think about having a family or mate.

Why does she avoid eye contact with other cats? What does her holding eye contact with a cat mean, and why are they likely special to her? She also sounds a bit gullible, but I like her characteristics.

Likes: Honest cats, fireflies, training to become a warrior, exploring her territory, sparrows, sunsets, and rainy days.

Dislikes: Dishonesty, loud noises, being confined to camp, large streams and bodies of water, hare, damp moss, and droughts.

Makes sense.

Strengths: Her optimism, cleverness, charisma, and ability to trust others.

Weaknesses: Her softness, being easily gullible, not being able to keep eye contact, and not thinking much before she acts.

Interesting! I was correct about her being gullible. She also seems very impulsive based on this.

Fears: Aquaphobia (fear of water), scopophobia (fear of being stared at, feels like you're being scrutinized).

Why does she have these fears? Is there an event she experiences where she almost drowns? Is there an event where she's stared at for a long time while being scrutinized by her Clan leader, or another cat in her Clan?