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Skypaw [SkypawOfBreezeClan]

OC by SkypawOfBreezeClan.

OC's Name: Skypaw

Past name(s): Skykit

Future name(s): Skyleap

Reasoning behind OC's name: Sky because he's rose-colored, idk why it just fit. Leap because he would always leap in to protect his clanmates, despite his flaws

Skyleap is an interesting name. I feel like Dawn would fit more based on his appearance, but that's just my own opinion. The suffix's reasoning makes sense, and I like that.

Gender: Male

Pronouns: He/him

Age (in moons): 11

No comment.

Clan/Tribe: Are fan Clans okay? BreezeClan

You said that BreezeClan is like WindClan. Describe more about BreezeClan. How is it similar to WindClan? How is it different? What are the Clans near BreezeClan?

Rank: Med app/Med

Sexuality: straight

No comment.

Description: Rose-colored tom with blind green eyes

Is there anything else about his appearance? Like fur texture, fur length, etc.

Personality:outside he is grumpy an rude, but actually a cinnamon roll inside

I feel like this needs a bit more descriptors, but I'm not judging too harshly, since Skypaw seems to be very important to you.

Likes: HIs Clan, his family, almost everything he seems to dislike

What is 'almost everything he seems to dislike'?

Dislikes: Cats who threaten his Clan, things he seems to REALLY dislike Strengths: He's fast and loyal

What are the 'things he seems to REALLY dislike'?

Weaknesses: He's blind and doesn't know how to fight

Fears: His Clan will be in danger

Alright. You didn't mention strengths. Does Skypaw have any?

Family: Blossomfall (Mother) Badgerfang (Father) Rosethorn (Sister) Leafwing (Sister) Stormfeather (Brother) Dappleflight (Sister) Webwing (Sister) Dewshine (Sister) Cloudlight (Sister) Patchpaw (dead sister) Rainpatch (Brother) Wisteriafall (Aunt) Crystalblaze (Grandmother) Quailwing (Aunt) Forestscar (Uncle) Darkthorn (Grandfather) YKNOW WHAT- CAN I JUST DRAW A FAMILY TREE AND SEND IT TO YOU XD

Wow, he has a lot of family! What are his relationships with his family members? Does he know them all well?

Mate(s): none, but will fall in love with Cherrypaw/shine of BlazeClan

Kit(s): none

Ah, forbidden romance! What happens between Cherrypaw and Skypaw?

Mentor: Blacksight (who is his cousin)

He has a lot of family. What's Skypaw's relationship with Blacksight?

Apprentice(s): none

Other relationships: none

Who are Skypaw's friends? Does he have any?

Cause of death: not dead

No comment.

Backstory: He was born after the Great Battle (with my Clans). Nothing much happened, until and outbreak of Greencough came. He helped however he could with the medicine cats, Foxnose and Blacksight, but many cats still died. When he was 6 moons old, he was apprentices to Blacksight ad Skypaw because of that. When he goes to the Starstone(Moonstone), an old leader, Rosestar, gives him a prophecy: A traitor and a savior, Echo and Sky, will change this land forever. The rest is incomplete. At 15 moons, he will become Skyleap

The backstory is alright, but it feels like it needs more detail! You can always resubmit once you have more developed for Skypaw.

Extra: none

Overall, Skypaw is an interesting character. There are things you need to develop more of, but since he has a lot of family, I don't blame you for not wanting to have multiple comments with all the relationships. More information about the Clans and BreezeClan would be nice, since I can't properly rate the backstory since I have no clue what their Great Battle is, or how his Clan acts. Since Skypaw seems very important to you, I tried not to judge too harshly. Skypaw could use a bit more character development, but I'd say that he's currently a good character. He just needs a few more traits and a more developed story, but it seems like his backstory is a work in progress, which is fine. I'd like to hear more about Skypaw eventually!