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Jamike: meant to be.
ParanormalEver since Mike fell in love with Jamie, a worker from an old Freddy Fazbear's Pizza, he has tried to find her and help her. but when he finds out she's really dead, he decides he has to free her soul. Will he be able to free her? Or could he have t...
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Guys can you please comment on the story so far, tell me what's wrong. Grammar, length, etc.
