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Agust D by _phoenix77_

Title 4.5/5
I liked it.

Cover 6/10

   The cover gave the idea about the theme and the picture of Yoongi suits it but I would suggest changing the saturation and zooming out the image a little. Also you can leave the eyes as they were in the actual image, that would look more real.

Blurb 8/10

To the point and giving the reader an overall idea of what to expect from the story.

Grammar/ Vocabulary 15/15

I couldn't find many issues with grammar or vocabulary. The structure of sentences and dialogues are clear.

First Chapter 9/10

The starting was great. We get to know what's going on with the female lead's life. Did a great job to hook readers for upcoming chapters.

Creativity 9/10

The creativity factor was really impressive. The way you defined everything helped a lot to create the image of the story. I loved how you added Yoongi's appearance from mv.

Pace 10/10

It's fine.

Character development 10/10