Woosh!

The Original

Writer's note: Hi! I wrote this story in my 6th grade English class (late 2016). I revised it for Wattpad, but I wanted to provide y'all with the original, unedited version! (I feel like Taylor Swift rerecording her albums lol) Anyways, enjoy the unedited Woosh!, the most 2016 story you will ever read.

Woosh!

Narrator's Point of View

One day on the Planet of Strange, Shine and her friends were discussing which planet to take over so they can become famous to all unicorns. Sprinkle, one of Shine's friends, thought that Earth looked interesting. They thought the Earth would be easier to take over in the year 2015, because of all the advanced technology like robots in the year 3072. They took their time traveling spaceship, The ET-423, to go to Earth. When the unicorns arrived, they found a building to land on. What they didn't know, was that the evil pegacorn, Cornacornia, was also there to take over Earth!

Shine's Point of View

"We have to take over the Earth! We can't let Cornacornia take over!"

"I have an idea!" Blue said.

"What is it?" I asked.

"First, we disable Cornacornia's lazer so she can't use it to kill people, then we use our lazers to shoot people and then we take over the world!"

"Thats a great idea!" I said. "First, we have to find Cornacornia. I think I know where she might be..."

Cornacornia's Point of View

"My plan is almost done! I just don't want those unicorns ruining it."

*door opens*

"Your plan is ruined!" Shine said. "You will not take over the Earth!"

"How did you get in here? I locked all the doors and..."

"You left the paper with the secret code on it outside." Sprinkle said.

*facepalm*

"I always make stupid mistakes."

Narrator's Point of View

The unicorns left Cornacornia's secret base to discuss their plan. They were figuring out how to disable Cornacornia's lazer, when they heard a voice. It wasn't Cornacornia's voice...

Dolan's (a random person) Point of View

"Look everyone! Unicorns ARE real!"

Everyone came to look at the unicorns.

"We have to leave now! We will come back later!" Shine said.

Narrator's Point of View

The unicorns got to their spaceship, and went back to 3072, on planet Strange. They had to be careful when they were on Earth so they wouldn't be spotted. They took out their memory gun so they could erase the memory of unicorns from the humans. They got back on their spaceship and headed for Earth, 2015.

They landed in a street in a big city. They remembered that they had invisibility potions so they didn't bother to bring the memory gun with them. They drank the potions and started walking around. It started to snow and then it got really cold, so the unicorns went into an old, abandoned building. To their surprise, they found Cornicornia at the top floor of the 7 story building!

Cornacornia's Point of View

"It looks like you have found my secret lair again." I said.

"Yes we have. And it looks your plan to destroy the world is going to be ruined now!" Rose said.

"Now we will press the blow up button to destroy your whole plan!" Blue said.

*push button*

"Now your plan will die!" Shine said.

*beep beep beep*

"Five more seconds!" Shine said.

*beep beep*

*Three, two, one*

*boomboomboom*

"Nooo! My plan is ruined!" I screamed.

Blue's Point of View

"I was so happy that we finally exploded Cornacornia's plan! Now we just have to make our plan work..."

"Blue! We are leaving! Come on!" Shine said.

"Coming!"

Narrator's Point of View

The unicorns left the old, abandoned building. They continued to walk around and they found a big place with screens everywhere. They were even on the buildings! They saw a sign that read:

WELCOME TO TIMES SQUARE

They figured that they were in Times Square. They had to kill everyone to take over the world, so that is what they did. They also needed to build a big golden palace for Shine, who is the leader of all unicorns.

When they were shooting people with lazers, Rose spotted a tall, green tree in someone's house. She wondered why they would have a tree inside the house, so she decided to take a closer look. Sprinkle came with her inside the house. They got inside and drank more invisibility potions. They found the tree in front of a fireplace. They looked closer and saw colorful boxes under it!

Rose's Point of View

"Sprinkle, I found something down here" I said.

"What is it?" Sprinkle said.

"I think it is a present or something like that." I told her. "Let's bring it to Shine so she can have a look at it."

Shine's Point of View

"Well..." I said. "It looks like something important is in it."

"We should bring it back to the spaceship to examine what's inside. Blue said.

"That's a good idea" I said.

Narrator's Point of View

The unicorns went back to the ET-423 to examine the box when suddenly...

*boomboomboomboomboomboom*

Cornacornia appeared! This is what the unicorns least expected! The unicorns quickly ran to the spaceship and typed in Strange, 3072.

*woooooooooosh*

The spaceship flew away.

To be continued...