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Story Name : AniDita: The perfect love!!
Ongoing story
~Story Line~
It's an ongoing book so I couldn't predict what the story line will be. Till now the writer has updated only 6 parts. But as of now I read that book I could see something suspicious between AniDita and their life. Anirudh and Bondita got seperated and Bondita has became Chandrachur's wife.
~Review~
First of all, kudos to the writer Reethiksha.
Second is, if you are light hearted then please gain some courage before reading her book. Because it is highly emotional.
The writer is doing a good job by showing us Chandrachur's good side.
She tries to give us the effects of serial in her words.
We could see scenes running in our mind while reading her words, for this she deserves to be appreciated. The writer keeps up the audience to be engaged in the story line by not opening up the main suspense of her story. I guess the suspense of Anirudh's change is her main plot.
The characters are the same as the main show. I am eagerly waiting for the suspense to be opened up.
~Highlights of this story~
We could see the villain chandrachur as a good human here who is completely different from the show and i hope the writer should maintain his charcter like this till end.
Emotions are delivered perfectly, we could relate their emotions as our own.
~Flaws/mistakes to be corrected~
As of now no big mistakes are spotted except some spelling mistakes and gender mentioning mistakes.
Language is not a problem here and we aren't born in London to write in better English. But still, there are some small grammar mistakes in this book that may make the reader hang on for a while just to sort out the correct meaning of the sentence. I too did the same, some sentences confused me and made me think "who is speaking to who".
So this is the only mistake i could notice in this book rest of the things are well written. And yes i hope you will correct this one in your upcoming parts.
As I said earlier, judging is not only appreciating but also telling their flaws just to make them improved.
~Stars out of 5~
Cover page: 1⭐(Because it is perfectly matched with the story line)
Story line: As of now, 0.9⭐
Dialogues: 0.5⭐(Try to avoid the repetition of words in a same sentence).
Words: 0.9⭐
Neat presentation: 0.7⭐(As there is some unwanted gaps and punctuations)
Totally: 4/5 ⭐
~Marks out of 100~
Story line: As of now, 15/20
Cover page: 20/20
Dialogues: 12/20
Words: 18/20
Presentation: 15/20
Total: 80/100
Author of this book: reethiksha
Reviewer: Hslwritings
All the best for your upcoming journey, Reekshitha!❤️
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