Hello Everyone to the BARRISTER BABU REVIEW SHOP!
So, today we are having a book for review!
We really tried to give the correct review!
We have, patramonalisa 's "Anidita: You and Me".
Author's Name : @patramonalisa
Review:
This story is actually very sweet and if you want a family drama with comedy and romance you'de definitely love this book. This book is not connected through the real storyline but is really beautifully written with well defined characters.
Modifications-
As this story continues with romanticism and intimacy scenes with an legal adult, it is strictly advised to put a caution note on Teleiophilia and Pedophilia till the right age if the underage character. Otherwise as per Wattpad community rules it might fet deleted.
Right punctuations should be used, instead of repeating the same type.
Use synonyms for some words instead of repeating them oftenly. That's how you can have a new vocabulary of words to yourself and other writers who are reading your work.
The book is at a slow pace which can result in loss of readers as the readers may forget the storyline and stop reading the book. Would advise to continue shortly.
Story-
The characters are beautifully defined within the story, and have a nostalgic storyline. Bubbly, Proud, Grey, Dark and Vibrant characters with a touch of elegance. This story is beautifully written with low flaws.
Personal Note to Author-
Dear Author, this story is fascinating but I would recommend you to write frequently, adopt a new dictionary of words and try to provide clean dialogues for the characters. Use of much punctuation may be a pull down but still the storyline is amazing and dramatic in a good way. This is an amazing piece of work which should be appreciated. Wish you all the best dear for the new plots.
Matured Content- Yes (a little)
Chapters completed till now - 29
Book status- Ongoing
Actual Plot- An Innocent Bondita is attracted towards Anirudh at a young age unknown to the fact that her sister is already in love with him vice versa. At the peak of her teenage hormones for him, she gets to know about their wedding. However the story twists with romance, climax and other things to spice up the mood.
Stars- 4/5
Score - 97/100
Percentile- 97%
Storyline - (currently) 18/20
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Reviewer of the book- _Lustrous_Angel
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