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Today we are having Sanjivani' s book " A bond like Anidita " for the review.
We really tried our best to give this book the perfect review. Hope you will also like it!!
Author's username: violet_mxgic
Overview:
Chapters done :- 9
Status of the book: Ongoing
Matured :- No (not yet)
Story line :- The story starts from the end of Manorama track and takes a different turn where Bondita is taken to London by the Roy Chowdhury's.
Review :
Personal connect:
The story actually falls under the category of family drama and the writer has portrayed the emotional connection between the characters so beautifully through her words. Though the conversation between the characters are penned emotionally, somewhere their feelings aren't expressed properly.
Pace of the story :
So far the story is moving at a fast pace without any lag in between. This actually makes the readers continue reading without getting bored.
Content :
Though the story line seems to be usual and predictable, the way it is portrayed wants a person to continue reading.
Modifications for betterment:
The book doesn't have a lot errors which has to be immediately corrected. So here are some points which can be modified to improve the reading experience.
1) Usage of short forms (Eg:- pls for please), can be avoided as it at times fails to give the essence of reading a story or novel.
2) New vocabularies can be used instead of repeating the same words. By this the writer would get exposed to new words whereas the readers won't feel the repitation of words.
3) Punctuation should be used regularly and few terms can be italicized or highlighted to make the story more appealing.
Overall perspective:
Altogether it is a feel good emotional story and it is being elegantly authored by the writer. The speciality of the story is that it has a realistic touch towards every character and scene. Nothing is phrased in a cinematic way. Another plus point is the way the dialogues are written. This gives a gripping essence to the story.
Message to the author:
This is truly an impressive work. Do
continue to give your best in writing.
Wishing you all the best for what your future holds!!
If you feel that
something has been missed out or stated wrongly, you can approach me without any hesitation.
Stars :- 4/5
Score:- 90/100
Percentile :- 90%
Reviewed by: raakshiithapriya
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