Golden Eyes

The Intro

There was a warm breath from behind, which gently moved her rose color hair across her cheek. Its nostrils flared up, this time it took a deep breath in. frozen in fear, she was afraid of making a slight muscle movement just incase the beast was to get very upset. There was no way of knowing how huge this beast was. Finally curiosity got the best of her, she tried to calmly turn around. She gasped at the sight of what she thought was gonna be a bear only what she saw was much worse then that. Looking closely she saw the beast eyes where the gold of that a fresh sunset. drips of water falling from the caves high ceiling caused an echo. Just as one echo would fade another would drop causing yet another sound. Even with the wet and damp walls the cave shone with a golden light that shone from his treasures that still shined brightly as if cleaned by the pirates who used to behold the gold coins. The creature's breathing has gotten more upbeat, the breath rolled off of her face. She held her breath until she couldn't no more... then she let out a soft unwillingly noise which she regretted the moment it happened. The beast dragged his claw across the floor as if it were a warning. Her legs started to feel numb from the cold draft coming from some where in the sunken cave. Everything started becoming a blur. blinking hard hoping that would keep herself from passing out from shivering so hard. She started to sway back and forth. The beast looked at her with a slightly curious look. The cave started to spin, the gold and diamonds starting to look as if they where spinning past her. Her feet and legs started giving out on her, causing her to fall forward, and with everything going dark the beast just inches from her face.

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