Chapter III + Rewrite I

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[I'm not quite sure what happened in the original but there are missing paragraphs in the story]
[Additionally, ub- I really can't be bothered to fix it because I don't recall what I wrote,,]

[Sorry about that,,]

[Also, this is the last chapter regarding what I've had in my notes.]
[I certainly will be rewriting this yet again, just because I can, it's interesting to view what will come out of it, and yes. Just yes.]

[Oh yeah, by the way, I have six different versions of this story lol? The only reason I haven't posted the others is because it only goes to the second chapter.]

[Also renaming the chapters to ch# + rewrite#1, since i want to rewrite the rewrite but since it's a rewrite, I would need to number the rewrites to I can hopefully clarify which rewrite is which.]
[Also hopefully people understand what I just wrote,,]

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• Original Chapter III •

Black eyes blinked as he tried to comprehend what the small child had just called him.
'Papa' his brain helpfully replayed to him, 'He called you Papa!'

Severus exe has shut down. He was absolutely floored and shocked. Why this young child would call him 'papa' in his entire lifetime, Severus was absolutely confused.

Not that he hated the idea, of course, but more so that he was offset that this was his arch nemesis' child.

Moving slowly towards harry as to not startled him,

[Missing Part]

Starting at papa, harry wondered why he hasnt moved, or talked yet.

[Missing Part]

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"Big brother Dudley!" he whispered, as he pointed to the child that was desperately trying to reach for Harry.

(written on ???)
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• Chapter III rewrite •

"Hand me the mail, Harry!" Dudley shouted as both boys raced towards the door, trying to look at the mail. For whatever reason, both of them seemed to know that the ordinary old mail today was special.

"No!" Harry yelled at him, fumbling with the letters and catching one with his name upon it. "one of them is mine!"

"It's only one of them Harry, give me mine!" Dudley yelled back, yanking some of the letters from Harry's hands.

Before both boys could veiw what was within their letters, Vernon sneered at Harry and snatched up all of them. "I'll have none of that nonsense! Who would have ever decided to write to you boy!?" He bellowed at harry.

Both boys became quiet as the whale-like man flipped through the letters. "Well we have a letter for me, me, pet, my boy, and me. See look, there wouldn't ever be a letter addressed to-"

Vernon stoped mid sentence.

Suddenly all of the letters, cept for the remaining two with their names on them, ended up on the floor.

Dudley and Harry shared a small glance. They have never seen the man look so shocked before. He staring at the two letters with a horrified look for more than a minute. His face turned red and he began to shake and shout.

"YOU FREAK! WE TOOK YOU IN WHEN NO ONE ELSE WANTED YOU AND YOU DARE INFECT DUDLEY WITH YOUR FREAKINESS!?" He Screamed, his face getting redder and redder like a cherry, and pushed the boys to the ground while rushing to the dining area, letters in hand.

Both boys got slowly got up and joined the two adults in the dining room, Harry slightly behind Dudley. They shared another look as they looked at the adult, trying to make sense of Vernon's rambling.

(written on feb 21st 2021)
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