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Hey,
It's me. The writer himself, I'm here to say that...I didn't really come up with a proper plan. The thought of an MWII OC book went into my head and I jumped in without thinking. I've just decided to rewrite this book with proper planning.

I thought the dialogue was poor after I looked back at it. It didn't have personality, or emotion, just a few 'cheesy' moments. For example, Lukas was portrayed as that cheesy gruff member of the gang.

I should've thought harder about the OCs' personalities and I will in the rewrite. The first chap after the prologue had an opening similar to 'Piccadilly' from MW. I'm thinking of definitely rewriting this.


Anyway, the rewrite is bound to appear this month!

Take care.

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⏰ Last updated: Nov 20, 2022 ⏰

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