(On Hold) Retribution (Act I)

Intrepid Cause

TL;DR - Authors note. I will put it into bolded text where the chapter starts.

Alright. Before I go ahead and let you all read the chapter, I wanted to thank you guys for the support on the book. I started this little project, how I started my other books. A Sample and a idea, something that I was dumber back then to what it is now.

In the original version of the book you guys are reading now, I had 19 chapters all written out. However I came to realize quickly that, what I had weren't really chapters, and they weren't really fun to read. Like many, I made the mistake and just did what I wanted to do without thinking of what I could have done, and I actually Uber powered Naruto for no reason.

And I regret trying that. Never again, lol.

If you want a fun story that you can write and others can enjoy, go at your own pace, do something you enjoy, either it be a fanfic like how I am doing now that, many of you guys are reading now, at this moment in time or later on when you stumble across it.

Just know that everything is done for a purpose and a reason. Even if others may not like it, there are somethings that are better left remaining the same and set in stone that are critical to the development of the book.

However on a serious note, lemme go ahead and get down to business.

Now some portions of this book may not make sense, nor follow the set pattern of his Naruto went on, but I want to do it my way, which means everything done will not be set in stone how it was done in cannon. Some stuff will be explained, and I will like to explain something here. Each of this may change and how it changes will differ with how I choose to do it, but it will be sticking to the main set line pattern.

Firstly, I would like to address that Instead of a 1 month time skip, there was a 2 Month Timeskip, and Kakashi AND Jiraiya training Satsuki, Sakura, and Naruto. However with this, something else has changed, and with this change something more has begun to happen.

I will it spoil what has happened or what was changed, and how it was changed, but I just wanted it to be set in stone here, that there have been MAJOR CHANGES.

Now of course with these changes, will come there own consequences. I have said but if what was done, but not what will happen.

Secondly, I would like to disclose the following.

Naruto will be a different type of "Uchiha", considering I wanted to do something different: Naruto once he gets the mangekyou will just jump straight to Eternal. His abilities and so fourth will just be something I'm not sure of just yet.

He will NOT have the Mokuton at any point in time, nor will he ever actually use the Rinnegan. The Rinnegan eyes that he stole from The dying Madara in the very beginning of the book, will play a much deeper meaning, and it's not gonna be given to anyone. Within time, it will be showed and, everything will come full circle.

Lastly, Naruto does not have Amaterasu. Although he had taken Sasuke's eyes, he also DOESNT have the dna or eyes of Sasuke. That to will also be explained in due time. Mainly through Kurama's point of view. Some of which will be explained soon.

However keep these words in the back of your mind, my readers.

Within the tides of time, Sons and Daughters must rise to surpass those who were the ones who came before, and must always be ready rise to the challenge.