(On Hold) Retribution (Act I)

Morals.

No matter what happens in life, never give up. Even if it seems so hard to do.

It doesn't matter on who you are. Just understand that there will always be someone who will be there to support and help you, even if shit doesn't turn out that way.

Anyways, on with the story.

"When is he going to wake up?"

"It should be soon. Give him time, he went all out against the Snake Sannin, so understands that he's...in a coma. Mainly from chakra over  use. Just get back in the bed, and we will watch him from here on out."

"B-But, what do you mean, he's my teammate, and I worry for his he-"

"Miss Uchiha, let us do our work. Please, we will help and save him."

What exactly happened...

The Boy opened his eyes up to a white void. It took him a second, but as the blurry haze disappeared, his eyes widened slightly before he jumped up.

"What the hell? Where am I?"

Naruto got a better view of his surroundings and as he looked down to the ground. Water pooled around his ankles as he looked back to the reflection of himself in the water.

As he stared down and at...himself, his eyes slowly started to widen, as below he didn't see the younger him, but older him. The boy had forgotten his looks, and put his hand to his face, and the water him, or the older him, matched this.

"What the hell...?"

"You know I can say the same thing."

Then boy had shot up at the second voice, before he turned his body around.

Behind the boy stood a much older, and...sleeker looking man. This was him, actually? The young boy tilted his head as he raised his brows in confusion. Why was the old him, infront of him?

"W-Wait, what? How in the world...how are you here?"

The Older Naruto chuckling and crouching down to the level of the boy. His surprise and confusion respectable for the situation at hand. it was weird, to see yourself...your past self, infront of you. Simply put, He decided to answer the questions.

"My my, how much you've gotten stronger in comparison to the past us. You've already far surpassed our limits not with where we are at, and i must say you are surprising me. A Sharingan already...Kurama was right. Our, old Kurama. This new you would be a separation of my memories and past me, but not hold the same...Me. Infact, i want to say we are split. WE are two different individuals."

The Boy paused, before a chair formed behind the older naruto. He, sitting down and looking at the wide eyed boy infront, as he continued.

"I Want you to understand we are two split personalities. I'm the suppressed and, contained version of you. During the process we split and..i was locked away. you however obtained a part of me, and i of you. You know you are here now, not in your mind but...your soul. Fun fact, the darker the void is, the more black your soul is...and we are lucky ours is white as snow. But that...isn't why im here. I'm here to give you...answers. I Have enough time to give you a few, and i wanna also...request something from you. But that will be after."

The Young boy listened to the older version of him as he was, sitting down now. He, focusing his attention to the same eyes as his own, as he nodded.

"I...I guess, yea. Uhm...give me a moment. I Need to process everything."

Naruto had put his hands against his face and just closed his eyes. Thinking about everything and simply...processing everything. . .


He would need a few minutes.














In the Mindscape, the boy had gotten over the shock, and simply looked up to the naruto infront of him. He, having never moved from his position as he stared at his younger counter part...before the boy sighed.

"So, I'll ask all the questions i have, in a single path. There are four you can only ask, so here is what i have to ask you. Firstly, what exactly happened that fucked up the teleporting process to split our...spirits. Secondly, How am i here now in my Soul and how do you even know what this place is? Thir-"

The boy was cut off. He, stopping as he looked up to The older naruto who spoke.

"While we were teleporting, we were low on Chakra. EXTREMELY Low, and more then just low. Kurama...told me about a technique to use called Baryon Mode. This, allowing for him to imbue his life essence into this technique and my own into it. So in a sense, as he was dying and i was traveling back to a different Reality, being the one we are in now, and...to preserve me, he put all his power into me, and we kind of fused together. But then that caused a split between you and, what would have been me."

The boy nodded at that, he looking at something off to the side, before grabbing at the air, Suddenly, a three pronged Kunai forming in his hand as he looked at it...then the older him.

"That makes...some sense. Now, what about the other one...how am i here in my soul, and how do you even know where we are."

The Young man was curious and...confused. How he got here he didn't know...but he was asking. Might as well.

"Well...you battled Orochimaru. You exhausted your limits, and that pushed your body into a comatose state, and in that comatose state...you were dying. This, here is basically where you had to go as the final place. Kurama is healing you, and...by you were dying, i mean your chakra was incredibly low, and you had a few broken bones. But, they are healed..and healing.You'll make it out of it alright."


This caused him to jump up in shock as he grabbed the man infront of him, this causing the older version of himself to stare in shock.

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN! I CAN'T DIE, I GOT SO MUCH TO LIVE FOR, AND I NEED TO FIGHT THAT SNAKE PEDO TO SAVE THE THIR-"

The older man got out of the tight hold, before punching his younger self. This, causing him to stagger back and land in his chair, he wincing from the force as he put a hand on his cheek. His Sharingan flaring to life as he scowled.

"Hey, what is the big fucking ide-"

He was cut off himself, he staring now as he was shut up. The man infront of him shared the same sharingan, and he leaned forward.

"WE, are connected. In a sense, so i want to say this. My time here, is limited. Please, calm down and...ask your third question. You are alive and will return to the real world soon...i apologize about punching you, But calm down."

The Older naruto could be seen putting his own hand to his face, a mark forming on his cheek as he never broke the stare he gave the young boy. In his eyes, He could see something...he wasn't expecting himself to obtain yet. 

They both shared Three Tomoe in both Eyes...but they reverted back to blue as The boy sighed. He had looked to his hands. 

"Thirdly, what happens to us. you said you were going to fade away...is there some way to stop that?"

The older naruto remained quiet, before he looked up tot he boy who stood up and walked over to him.

"Come on, there has to be a way to stop this. To stop you from disappearing. I Mean you are here now, so come on. Think, there has to be a way."

The man sighed. He figured the younger counterpart of him would suggest something like this, as he stood up. He, scratching his neck as he put his hand on his shoulder.

"I Will tell you, but give me your fourth question. Make it quick."


The Boy tsk'ed, before looking at the older man.

"How do i stop Madara!"

The sudden question came at a surprise, but he smiled at the boy and crouched down. 

"That will come in due time. You'll find the answer to that yourself...but here is my request. I will fuse my spirit into you and give you some of my strength, and the key to unlock Your Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan."


The Boy blinked in confusion at the words of the man and shook his head. Unsure of it, but he stopped. He, looked up to the man infront of him, and asked.

"If we fuse back together, will i forget everything...and will you be gone?"

The older naruto smiled, and shook his head. He, looking to his left hand that started to fade away into dust, as he looked at the boy infront of him.

"No, you won't. I'll say this...I'll be gone, but i won't be forgotten. Remember, im entrusting everything to you...my strength, power, and everything...use it when the moment comes...defeat the pedo, and change the future."

The young boy who began to tear up slightly nodded, as he watched the hand on his shoulder move from his chest, before smiling one final time.

"Make use of this power. You'll unlock it in time...but keep in mind, you will have my strength and speed. It'll be a minor increase, but you will learn to use it over time...good luck."

He took a deep breath, before sighing, as the mans eyes opened and he pushed his hand forward.

"HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"

Around them, A bright red and blue light resonated form the Naruto, as he began to disappear. The boys eyes widening at the strength being bestowed into him, as he Opened his mouth. Sharing the same yell, before his vision slowly began to whiten, then..





Darkness.

"Hey, Wait a minute...Everyone, get the doctors now! He is awake! Naruto Uzumaki is Awake!"

(1608 Words.)

Took way to long. Sorry about that.