He makes my world spin (JohnDave)

chapter one

This is my first yaoi please don't be a dick

John sat in his room playing random video games waiting for his friend Dave Strider to answer his pester. His black hair messy and tangled from his quick nap. His blue eyes reflected the game he played while his blue tee brought the color out brighter. He wore simple black shorts and his white socks charged up static electricity with every leg shuffle. John turned as a knock on his front door echoed through his open room door. His dad was gone for the week visiting some friends for a party or what not. John lazily got out of his chair and quickly jogged to the door. He peered through the peephole in his door. There was not a soul on his porch. John opened the door and found a small package on his doorstep. "Hmm?" John muttered to himself. He picked it up smiling. It was from his friend Dave. The blond red eyed male always made him smile just at the mention of his name. John took the package inside. He set it on the counter while he strode to get a pair of scissors. The box opened to reavel a few boxes of apple juice and a letter. It read :John have some aj I have a surprise for you later -Dave. John smiled. Dave was going to be over later. John ran to his room to get his hair combed. "Sweet Dave's coming over! This is going to be great!" John thought grinning.
Sorry for the short chapter would like feed back before I go on though