I see issues in the photo above, so I wanted to have an outlet for my opinion on how it should have been written.
Keep in mind this is biased, as I have my own opinions and preferences when it comes to reading and other forms of Larry media I consume.
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Liam: New to it, needs some instruction, but not bad
Harry: Hates it, avoids it at all costs but LOVES to get his ass eaten (by Louis obvs)
Zayn: You gotta sit on his face, he's not doing the work (the pic is correct on this one)
Niall: Completely does not know how, It's bad
Louis: loves eating ass, changes technique as the person (Harry) responds physically and verbally, very very good, a pro
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Ps: this is a fucking joke, don't make it more serious than it is. I will not argue with anyone and will delete any disrespectful comments. You can leave opinions though, as long as you are being respectful to everyone involved (Me, 1D, yourself, other readers)
I'm writing something new for this fic and editing my other one shot that was previously published in this fic, I'll be back soon!
